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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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she flowed out of the car one smooth leg after the other with liquidity and grace her sex appeal dripped from head to toe as she poured across the concrete at the crook of her finger men splash at her knees spewing words of undying love begging for just one drip and I look down at my jeans and comfortable shoes and suddenly I don't feel... wet enough [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 06-27-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
geez... you've done it again!!! you wrote a fabulous poem and forgot to check the submit button... do you have as much problem as i do submitting? it's been raining a lot here... no drought this summer like last great poem, corazon... i know i've read this before... or maybe i wrote it? LOL... i wish.... come back and check submit and i'm back to vote..! *wink* |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
lol, thanks doreen...will claim lack of sleep....but we both know how old I am, so I won't claim it too loudly  thanks  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
whaddya talkin' about? i don't know anything about you... hehe matter of fact, from what i heard, your frigging ageless, just like me! vote's in! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey this is Great! Wow, enjoyed the read. voting! Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and suddenly I don't feel... wet enough --------------- Welcome to my world hon, I've spent my whole life in a dry spell... excellent poem... later, jm |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
A very well done peom, loved it The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well the title got me girl, and I'm kinda curious on how you propose to get wetter...need help...lol i'll just drip this one into the vote box. Parker |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corazon~ How well I remember this one ! Wonderful images spring off the page. Good choice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks all, and thank doreen for catching my booboo before I left for the day and haleyja...lol...help at getting wetter? oh my my *blushing at the thought* rofg... |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
I don't feel wet enough either after reading this  but it was great anyway.Thanks, Pete |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corazon~ I can't vote enough for this one..... this is definately my favorite in here......I printed it! This is me all the way (sadly, the one not wet enough)  **********VOTE********* -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It doesn't get any wetter than this!  Vote's in.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Just perfect, and the end...super! Voting! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks all, and lol@SEA, yep, that feeling is universal i guess.... thanks again |
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