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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 138


0 posted 2000-06-27 05:57 AM


Ocean of Bliss

Thy sweeping of tides
Bleeding away thine pain
Caressing deeply into soul
Pattering thy senses reign

Sandbar of flowing time
Gives thine face a gentle kiss
Dreams could ne'er compare
Thy rippling ocean of bliss

Sunlight's rapturing warmth
Baking thine skin in radiance
Thine ever glowing free spirit
Total high tide of confidence

© Copyright 2000 Esmeralda Ponsonby - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-06-27 06:00 AM


Quick! Grab the sunscreen and let's go.
Well written. A great concept.

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-06-27 09:08 AM


oooh i love this ones sunkissed devotion
BEAUTIFUL POEM
take care
jm

linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia
3 posted 2000-06-27 09:31 AM


This has the feeling of being able to wash away any wrongs... very nice.
Linda M.

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA
4 posted 2000-06-27 09:46 AM


I guess I'm a sucker for ocean poems and I liked this one a lot.

Pete

Denise
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Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-06-27 08:15 PM


Absolutely blissful!  

Denise

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