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Ocean of Bliss

Esmeralda Ponsonby
Member

since 2000-04-02

Posts 138

0 posted 2000-06-27 05:57 AM

Ocean of Bliss

Thy sweeping of tides
Bleeding away thine pain
Caressing deeply into soul
Pattering thy senses reign

Sandbar of flowing time
Gives thine face a gentle kiss
Dreams could ne'er compare
Thy rippling ocean of bliss

Sunlight's rapturing warmth
Baking thine skin in radiance
Thine ever glowing free spirit
Total high tide of confidence

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2000-06-27 06:00 AM

Quick! Grab the sunscreen and let's go.
Well written. A great concept.

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-06-27 09:08 AM

oooh i love this ones sunkissed devotion
BEAUTIFUL POEM
take care
jm

linda munday
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia

3 posted 2000-06-27 09:31 AM

This has the feeling of being able to wash away any wrongs... very nice.
Linda M.

Not A Poet
Member Elite

since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

4 posted 2000-06-27 09:46 AM

I guess I'm a sucker for ocean poems and I liked this one a lot.

Pete

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-06-27 08:15 PM

Absolutely blissful!

Denise

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