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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
~Writer~ Sitting in a place Of warm solitude I write in my journal Hoping no one will intrude I play some music Maybe loud rock n’roll Maybe sounds of nature To soothe my soul I set down all my Thoughts and poses Things of forget-me-nots And wild roses I can look back to see Where I have been To see where I am going I just release my pen My thoughts run wild Or down a charted course Dreams of childhood Hopes for a horse The birth of my children The breakup of marriage Slow dancing Rides in a carriage When I am done I will lock away this book Hoping no one finds it No one takes a look My private Thoughts and poses Forget-me-nots And roses. ©1999~CJB~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
MagnoliaBlue, a wonderful poem. we all need our secrets and private verses. beautifully written. "An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots" joy division |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MagnoliaBlue~ Pretty thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yes....and few things ever feel as good as this great poem... take care, jm |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written... enjoyed your poem. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is a beautiful poem, blue.... |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Thanks so much for the comments,fellow poets! Much appreciated! MagnoliaBlue Caribbean Island Property(PARADISE) FOR SALE.Investors wanted to start World Class Resort and Marina.No Risk or Blue Sky. joonz@mindspring.com |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I love this one. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Yesterday and tomorrow,,,of the beauty on the sorrow. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful Magnolia. . . Journaling is a very important part of life. . .helps keep us sane. . . Excellent poem!! -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Thank you for taking the time to comment. Glad you like it! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Oh this is wonderful! I too have one of those journals (LOL well actually more than one!) maybe after I am dead....my children can read them and know their Mom unbound by life's conditions and rules...ohh on second thought maybe I don't want them to know! *wink* Great poem girl! ~Heather |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thoughts on paper are a treasure for the future...lovely poem! |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ah, the beauty that flows from your released pen June, this is wonderful. Bonnie |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Sweet read,MaggieB. Gossamerwings |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wonderfully written writing down life as it happens, reading it as it was, thinking in ink on what will be... everyone should have their private escape! i truly love this dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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