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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Standing here, waiting to begin Looking back at where we've been You came into my life from out of the blue And I can't think of a better time than this to tell you A lot has happened from the start Since the begining, you've had my heart From the day we met "we were more than friends" And my love "I can hardly wait till we meet again" Walking together with hope in our hands I've given hope, you've helped me stand From each other my love we draw strength There's nothing for you I wouldn't do I'd go to any length We never knew which way we'd walk We would just hold hands and talk "If you don't really know where you want to go It doesn't matter which road you take" Our hearts will know The band warms up and begins to play My love, how I've waited for this day To be here with you since we took that chance To do the one thing that we've never done. . . . . . We've never danced. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh yes, dance, dance the night away.... beautiful Sven My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Sven this is a fav of mine and I really enjoyed reading it again Thanks for the read buddy and you have my vote Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Great job Sven.. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This one says so much. Most certainly a good addition to any poetry book. Marina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
one of my most favs of yours and so perfect to reflect your work here. jm |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is a touching testament to your heart's entrusted, my friend... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Sven, I read this poem weeks ago, and I am glad to see it here. I cannot get it out of my head, and it is by far my favorite of all of your postings. It conjures up some wonderful images for me, love it. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*big sigh* yep this was nice! (now I have this weird achey feeling in my chest.....ya made me all sorta sad, in a good way LOL) twas a good'un Sven, you never disappoint me! ~Heather |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
*starting the music playing* Grab her quick Sven Yet another goody from the pen of Sven. Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great writing my friend. Some day you will dance . . . I know it. LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, And your words just danced right in to my heart, this is beautiful, really enjoyed. Love, Cerenity |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
And please..... Dance the night away, never stop! This is wonderful Sven. Glad to see it back my friend! ~Sheri |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I just wanted to thank everyone for voting for this poem. . . Thank you all. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very beautiful Sven I love to dance This was beautiful LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
sorry forgot to vote on it, so had to come back LOL LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If I were to take your hand and you would sway me with the band would I be yours then to command... lead on... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Sven Oh how very nice!!!! LIkED IT!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Good one Sven. Great sentiment and verse. You have my vote. fh |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh, romantic Sven ... this just danced into my heart! Wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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