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since 2000-05-12
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0 posted 2000-06-23 02:17 PM

-My Beautiful Storm-

like a beautiful storm you blew into my heart of stone
thoughts of you running through my mind, taking away the feelings of being alone

you've opened my eyes to so much, you've given me back that passionate rush
how I've missed that feeling in my world, how I want so much to be just yours

falling into your life and into your soul
feeling my heart start to mend and grow
then feeling the wall you start to place between you and I
it makes me sit back and just wonder why

how do I turn off these feelings that have consumed so much of my heart and mind
sometimes I wish I could just turn back the hands of time

facing the truth of never having you in my arms again, I start clinging to you as my friend
but knowing this storm has to come to an end,
I realize my worst fear...the loss of my lover and my friend

oh how I will always love my beautiful storm that blew into my heart....even as it rips me completely apart

I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne

© Copyright 2000 Holly - All Rights Reserved
Christopher J
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94

1 posted 2000-06-23 06:27 PM

yes..yes...i like it, i am going through the same is so sad, but a brillant poem...i am going to look more of yours up!
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-06-23 07:13 PM

another strong emotional poem...
I like the style in which you write...
I look forward to seeing more
take care, jm

since 2000-05-12
Posts 127
3 posted 2000-06-23 07:34 PM

Chris-Thank you so much for the sweet words. I'm so sorry you know these feelings all too well though. I hope things get better for you.  

JM-I consider this high praise from reading your work. Thank you so much for the vote of condifenece.

I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne

X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
4 posted 2000-06-27 01:09 PM

*sigh* yup....this is an all true tale..


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since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
5 posted 2000-06-27 04:46 PM

What Heather said  

Beautiful poem Holly.


"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

doreen peri
Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
6 posted 2000-06-27 07:29 PM

I hate it when that happens.

a stormy, vivacious poem... thanks for the read!

Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
7 posted 2000-07-10 09:02 AM

Hi Holly,

Well this is wonderful my friend, yes relationships can for sure produce some mighty big storms in our lives, thank you so much for sharing this, so much enjoyed.


Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
8 posted 2000-07-10 07:58 PM

oh man....ouch....

I luvit though....

great piece here hun...


Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
9 posted 2000-07-18 07:25 PM

How well you've written about such a harsh storm....This is great.  Bonnie
Heather Miller
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
10 posted 2000-07-21 04:32 PM

I to know how this feels  (
Good writting..........

With God all things are possible.

Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
11 posted 2000-07-21 06:26 PM

Unique way of writing what so many can relate to.
I love how you ended it!

*After every storm, the sun must shine*  

since 2000-05-12
Posts 127
12 posted 2000-07-22 12:08 PM

Cerenity-you are so correct..storms throughout our lives, but I guess that's what makes life interesting.  

Bonnie, Heather, & WhtDove-Thank you all for the sweet words. I was shocked to see my poem that was posted a while back on todays topics. How sweet of you to go back and look through the post and find it.  

Chris--as always my sweet friend I appreciate your words! I value your views and thank you for always being so sweetly supportive.  

love & all,

I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
13 posted 2000-07-22 01:12 AM

very well written Holly
hope the set back dosen't harden that heart again

best wishes

Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
14 posted 2000-07-22 03:56 AM

This is so sad but well written, hope that storm hasn't made too much of a mess of your heart

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Fred Hobbs
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329
Tallahassee, Florida, US
15 posted 2000-07-22 10:24 AM


I really like this one.  You've done a very nice job here.


since 2000-05-12
Posts 127
16 posted 2000-07-25 02:54 PM

Again friends, I thank you for the words! The storm hasn't made too much of a mess Traci...without a storm we never see a rainbow. YOU GUYS ARE GREAT!
love & all,

Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
17 posted 2000-07-25 03:05 PM

Great writing ..very heartfelt ..
I'm glad you sailed into passions to hang your collection of emotional tapesteries on our wall.....GMV...ethome..

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