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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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I thought if I listened to him, I would also be heard. I thought if i was there for him, I would prove myself loyal. I thought if I shared my heart, He wouldn't punch through Yet another gaping hole. Shows you what I know. Standing here with my Swiss cheese Soul. *****kynder A woman to a man is But a mere chapter, But a man to a woman Is an entire book.-- Kynder Howell |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Such a sad poem... but wonderfully done.  Great job."Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Kynder, this is great! Very powerful message and the "swiss cheese soul" really drives the message home at the end. Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Such a sad image but very well written. I also particularly like the "swiss cheese soul" line. Thanks. Pete |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This goes to prove what 'thought' did I like this poem |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
This was a great poem....I like very much the swiss cheese soul line....but over here we have a brand of cheddar...Tillamook Cheese Factory Cheddar, I think you'd be better off switching to cheddar... *wink* ~Heather |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Really enjoyed this. Your humor -- even at a lousy situation -- shines through. Mike |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Great poem. Want me to rap him upside the head for you?  When you get out of this situation...remember he was a tiny little man with a tiny little brain and God knows what to do with little men like that! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Great job with this...I love it. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A nice image for a strong heartfelt poem... Good work kynder regards, sudhir |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
enjoyed your poem.. nicely written. |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wonderful, especially liked the "swiss cheese soul." |
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