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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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The Rose of my Eye ~~~ Strolling through gardens of roses so rare thoughts drifting ... sweet essence enchanting the air The colors ... the hues all pleasing to eye each petal ... a picture make breathing a sigh The trickle of water to pool crystal clear The frolic of birds ... with nothing to fear A moss covered bridge o'er meandering brook 'neath flowering tree finds you ... lost ... in a book My silent approach brings sparkle to eyes your lips ... gently curl with pleasant surprise There in my hand ... knelt down at your side a ring made with diamond for ' the Rose of my Eye ' ~~~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Such a sweet poem Rex! I love it.  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Poet deVine ... thankyou ... it is one of my favorites ... I didn't really propose that way ... but I wish I did and she is the 'Rose of my Eye' |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
One last run through the Gauntlet  }>{{{{o> |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
The trickle of water to pool crystal clear The frolic of birds ... with nothing to fear A moss covered bridge o'er meandering brook 'neath flowering tree My silent approach brings sparkle to eyes your lips ... gently curl with pleasant surprise a ring made with diamond for ' the Rose of my Eye ' Sigh...Rex that was so beautiful, breath taking...wow. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A moment captured so poignantly, Rex...this is lovely. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Brian ... Claire ... thankyou both for your kind replies ... I was beginning to think no one liked this poem |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
This is a great poem...it has my vote! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
thanks Christopher |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I like it, Rex, you old romantic soul. Vote's in! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*SIGH* I think all proposals should have a mandatory label......romance must be included in every serving.  Beautiful! ~Heather |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful Rex ! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtakingly beautiful, Rex! Just lovely! Denise |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I can only agree, very good and well done. Oh by the way was it not your daughter that wrote such nice pieces? I think there should be here to (If I'm right) The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rex~ A fabulously beautiful poem...so romatic and tender...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Must have missed this one first time. Sorry bout that! This is great, and the wonderful imagery leaves a beautiful picture! (Sigh!) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Balladeer ... thankyou kind sir Heather ... that should be a prerequisite ... thankyou Munda ... thankyou Denise ... thankyou once again Helmut ... thankyou and yes it was my daughter ... she has entered a couple of poems Tracie ... thankyou for your kind replies WhtDove ... thankyou for reading ... I always like to hear from you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rex, My votes in. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Again I thankyou Seymour |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~  'The colors ... the hues all pleasing to eye each petal ... a picture make breathing a sigh' As exquisite as the lovely rose ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
thankyou Marge ... I'm going to save this rose to my graphics page |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Seems I can't get enough of your writing today Rex! A lucky young lady wears this ring you so sweetly describe ... just beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou Kit ... she's been my wife for 19 years now ( I remembered ) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou Kit ... she's been my wife for 19 years now ( I remembered ) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Dad burn thing ... who keeps hit'n send? [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 07-24-2000).] |
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