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Would You?.....I would.....++1000++.....a duet with Prometheus
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Would You?.....I would.....++1000++.....a duet with Prometheus |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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I am posting these two poems together, in celebration of my 1000th post. I owe the final beautiful touches to my partner in rhyme....Prometheus, (aka: Jamie). I would like to thank him once more for the answer, "I would..." to my question: "Would You?" What would poetry be without poets to share their special thoughts? "Would You?" Would you wander through this world and dance with me across this naked land? Would you still reach out to me, knowing how I long to take your hand? Would you like to run through misty forests just before the break of dawn? Would you chase the shadows one by one until the dark is finally gone? "I would..." I would wander.. I would dance.. I would reach out.. And take the chance.. I would run.. I would lay.. I would touch.. And brush your fears away.. "Would You?" Would you lay me down in fields of daisies in a meadow kissed by dew? Would you gently touch my soul with words of love that come from only you? Would you start a fire in my soul I can't control then walk away? or.. Would you take me deep within your arms of love, and kiss my breath away? "I would..." I would warm.. I would stay.. I would hold you.. And kiss your breath away.. "Would You?" Would you wish upon a star while lying with me, naked in the night? Would you dance with me while watching spirits dance within the Northern Lights? Would you chase the cold within my heart, by songs of love on wings of fire? Would you be the one to fill the need that grows within my heart's desire? "I would..." I would wish.. I would sing.. I would desire.. And fill that need.. "Would You?" Of all the questions I have asked, the one that has the hardest words to say.. Is one that has been known to break the spell, and drive your lover away.. Just little words, once spoken, soon determine how one's life will surely be.. I'm asking of your heart, for my heart's sake: Just tell me, please... Would you love me? "I would..." I would speak.. I would show.. I would please.. ~ ~ ~ ~ And love you so.. Once again, my thanks to Jamie..... You made this posting special!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! congrats on your 1000th Sunny.. this is a very cool poem duet creative and special indeed... very nice...VERY take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Janet Marie... Thank you so very much, and I'm glad this reply to you is the very first one of my new 1000!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I loved these both the first time thru and they make a great 1000th...thanks for all the inspiration you have provided me...and for all your kindhearted and generous replies. CONGRATS |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula... I wanted to thank you for your kind words. They sincerely mean a lot to me, especially today. If there is any inspiration, it comes from being able to share with you. Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I am honored that you felt my words worthy of being cast together with your Sunny1. As prolific a writer as you seem to be I am sure you will see 2,000 long before I. Until then, Congratulations on the 1,000! jamie |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW....congrats on your 1000th and for making so many of them to me....your works are always sunshine in my day.....This one is no exception by any means....It seems to be a perfect duet.  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Jamie.... Your poem truly did make mine complete. I thank you for your kind reply, and I hope we can share more thoughts and poetry on down the road! Until then.... Keep writing.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mark.... I'm so glad that I maybe put a little smile in your day, here and there. To me, that is what it's all about. Thank you for all the nice things you've written in your replies...that really has meant a lot to me.< !signature--> Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, how beautiful a duet. I loved this poem, and to see it combined with such beautiful answers, wow! And congrats on #1000. Also as an aside to Jamie, So there really are men like you in the world.. I am happy to know that.. catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
catalinamoon... Thank you for the congrats and nice thoughts. And, yes, there are still nice guys like Jamie in the world, and I think most of them are poets here at Passions!!!!!!!! Enjoy your day, my friend! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1 and Prometheus~ A delightful exchange ! Congrats on the 1000th post, Sun~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you, Marge....... and thank you for all the help you've given me since I've been here at Passions. It has meant a lot!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Wow, what charming questions and answers. Really liked this one. Congratulations on your 1000th post. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Eloise.... I can't take credit for this poem entirely, as Jamie added the beautiful finishing touches! He does such wonderful work!! But speaking for both of us, thank you, and I will take the congrats! It sure has been fun, here!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I loved them both the first time, and together they complete the circle...and of course, answer the question. Congratulations sunny!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Martie... Oh, thank you for saying that and the congrats......... I have a long way to go to get to where you are, my friend, but it shall be fun all the way!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Hello again Sunny, This poem captured me and is an outstanding achievement. I congratulate both of you for making such beautiful concepts intertwine like they have. I'm going back to read it again in a second. I really loved the creativity and thought put into the poem. 1000 hey... congrats on that too. Linda M. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Linda... Thank you so much for stopping by! This poem, with Jamie's, has become very special to me. Yes, thanks for the congrats! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, Congratulations on the 1000th. My, that is a great number. Another excellent job on the poem that you have done with Jamie. I bow, in the talent of you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, For some reason the poem stayed where it was when I replied. So, I thought that I would try again. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
First, congratulations on the iooo! Second congratulations on a perfectly lovely poem. This is so heartfelt and beutifully written. You two write well together Liz |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
EXCELLENT WAY TO CELEBRATE the 1 posts...WONDERFUL... Great going SUNNY and please do keep them beauties coming.... regards, sudhir |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Would you lay me down in fields of daisies in a meadow kissed by dew? Would you gently touch my soul with words of love that come from only you? Would you start a fire in my soul I can't control then walk away? or.. Would you take me deep within your arms of love, and kiss my breath away? loved this verse especially...congratulations !!! ~~sighing softly Maureen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magic, that's all I can say! The way you spun the dream perfect. I love this |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
To Bill, Elizabeth, Sudhir, Maureen, and Marsha..... I just wanted to say a special thank you to all of you!! I have always enjoyed your wonderful replies just as much as I enjoy writing....... Your friendship and sharing is what gives me such inspiration! Thank you so very much... Sunny1 Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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