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Within My Skin (repost for Cerenity's challenge)
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Within My Skin (repost for Cerenity's challenge) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I am the apple picked by Eve-- mother of the snake. I am not evil as perceived, I'm simply God-forsaked. Within my skin, the five-point star, circled by the breath of Kore. My only sin, should I be marked, is a yen to dare to ponder more... *wanted to put this in open, hoping more people would respond to Cerenity's challenge...It is a fun one! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Serenity Thank you for posting this, I thought maybe it was not a very good challenge silly maybe, but I was trying for on the light side seens things lately have been heavy with the book and all, maybe some fun. Thanks again, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
serenity, these few lines contain tremendous ideas. I enjoyed them. (Will check out Cerenity's challenge) Take care, ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is so cool.... I went and checked out the challenge... and its so appropriate YOU picked apple... very cool... i think i will give this one a try...  later-eden-gator me |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yes, the challenge has been met and in gold medal fashion in keeping with the Olympics.....wonderful read and you should be so proud to have reached the level of challenge and go beyond.  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Woman to the core ( no pun intended...well maybe a little) Loved the challenge. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wanted to say thank to all--especially Cerenity--I thought it was an interesting challenge (NOT DUMB! Don't make me come over there...lol) but you've me gratitude and I am looking forward to reading more answers to this one! |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
well this was pretty cool... now i have to go see what the challenge was... Tony |
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