Open Poetry #9 |
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His M.O. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion ![]() |
His M.O. With power wielded in opposing tactics one hand withholds while the other strikes snake-like. He never sets us free, tell me, how can we be unbound yet always restrained? Corinne |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Much can be said in very few words... Well done, Corinne.. ![]() |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I agree, there is a great deal of meaning in this short poem......great work Corinne! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
There is a metephor the Dr. Freud might like to comment on. Snakes and being tied up, wanting to be free but not. I'm a little confused. But, to jump right in, not knowing what is the real meaning, I'll just say be wary of any snake charmers, with rope... ![]() Park |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Nan, ehtome and Park. It's about Satan, that dark side always at the ready when you slip or fall. Real odd poem, I know, sorry about that! Corinne |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
one hand withholds while the other strikes snake-like. Very cool poem...this is where the slightest weakness is taken advantage of...we must always be on our guard and check ourselves daily...some of us choose not too.....it is all our path to find and hopefully not too late.....very thought provoking....me thinks me is in trouble though...LOL |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
how can we be unbound yet always restrained? ... free yet tied to the stake cool like ice yet burning - defaced, defrosted, consumed by the enticing cake, apple eaten is just a step taken, toward evil, closing - slipping senselessly ... Corinne, You have inspired a flurry of thoughts with a great poem... regards, sudhir |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Corrine...you've said a mouthful with very few words. Nicely done ![]() |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Mark, Sudhir and Hoot_Owl! Corinne |
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