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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-12 06:00 PM

Completion of memories
of a nights lasting dream
that foutunes have brought her
and of what they do mean,
to see the heart at rest
while her soul turns and fails
at what has turned to be
a falling of her vails.
The memories burn
of a nights gentle kiss
that made her come alive
for his presence again,
and of that touch he does have
the one that keeps her heart
she prays for the strength
that she may impart.
Of time that is coming
and of time that may be
she stays her course true
for the hardships she sees,
yet of a time that is coming
that of a distant sun
when this bird on a wind
shall finally find home.

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

1 posted 2000-08-12 06:13 PM

Oh Michael, you have left me speechless here.....as I read this over and over and over again........Your depth of understanding and loving heart are overwhelming. This bird seems so lost in flight.......but I am sure her heart, regardless of presence of body will always fly to you.
As Always
Jenn E

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2000-08-12 06:40 PM

Here's to safe and happy flights

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-08-12 07:08 PM

I really enjoyed reading this one, keep up the great work

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-08-12 11:14 PM

The memories burn
of a nights gentle kiss
that made her come alive
for his presence again,
and of that touch he does have
the one that keeps her heart
she prays for the strength
that she may impart.
Of time that is coming
and of time that may be
she stays her course true
for the hardships she sees,
yet of a time that is coming
that of a distant sun
when this bird on a wind
shall finally find home.

===========================
yet another one you need to be kissed for
this is just so gentle and tender Michael...
I second what Jenn says(again)

take care sweet-poet-in the-wind
jm

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

5 posted 2000-08-13 02:16 AM

Hoot-thankyou, maybe one day
luke- thanks for the complement..
Jenn-well, nothing I can say would come close to how I feel.......... thankyou
Janet-my poet in heart, I thankyou for your words of late

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

6 posted 2000-08-13 02:19 AM

this just gives my the warm fuzzies for some reason. I liked it.

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

7 posted 2000-08-13 02:27 AM

Hoot-thankyou, maybe one day
luke- thanks for the complement..
Jenn-well, nothing I can say would come close to how I feel.......... thankyou
Janet-my poet in heart, I thankyou for your words of late

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2000-08-13 03:56 AM

A very tender and beautiful poem
And an outstanding title
A very pleasant read
Liz

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

9 posted 2000-08-13 05:14 AM

What a timeless tale of love and longing...this is beautiful.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

10 posted 2000-08-13 11:07 PM

BUMP I DEE BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry, could'nt resist........

Jenn E

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