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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
A peice of paper crisp and new waiting to be used wanting to be important perhaps as a document legal and binding laminated and kept for reference or as a child's drawing innocent and bright treasured by the receiver as a reminder of youth maybe as a page of a great novel belonging to a story written by an aspiring James Joyce and fondly refered to as a first attempt at fame but most of all a love letter scribbled with passion stained by tears scented with perfume tucked away in a secret place reread over and over each time rekindling a flame instead it is used for the disposal of a piece of gum stale and overchewed it is crumbled up and thrown away |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BreyerRose~ Seems our forum family is blooming with 'roses' ! Welcome to the bouquet !  A wonderful first budding ... hope to see more of your work. Enjoy the works of our family of friends. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
Thank you Marge. I'm enjoying every minute of it so far. This place is great. Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS  This place is great, I too am a 'rookie' here as I joined about 6-7 days ago. I like your poem a lot b/c it makes one think about how one single sheet of paper could be the outlet of one's soul. However, we use it for miscellaneous purposes, such as throwing away gum ...lol as you said. I like this poem a lot and I hope you'll like here in Passions |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
Thank you JnR. I like the meaning you got from my piece, although slighty different than my own. Thats what poems are all about,right? The way the reader relates to them. Thank you for your comments. I loved your point of view. Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I really loved this, it flowed so great and was just an enjoyable read. I can't wait for more! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions and what a great first post |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
Lakewalker anxd hoot_owl_rn-Thank you for your kind remarks. Thank you all for the warm welcome. Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
what a grand entrance you have made, welcome |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
Thank you Michael. I'm very glad to be here. Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What a wonderful piece about writing. Paula, I say we rename this forum PASSIONATE ROSE GARDEN, what do you say? Kathleen |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
Irish Rose= With all the roses we have around here, thats probably not a bad idea. Thanks for your comments. I am so happy I found this site!!! Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A rose is a rose is a rose... among the breyers.... Nice entree, and welcome to Passions - This is indeed a great place - You'll love it here - Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
If I was called by any other name I'd smell just as sweet right? lol Thank you Nan. Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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