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Singing Psalm
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Singing Psalm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I'm lonely. (words that echo gong) I'm hurting. (days that last too long) I'm crying. (same old tired song) I'm helpless. (tired of being strong) I'm angry. (knowing right from wrong) I'm hoping. (that I might belong) I'm praying. (I have all along) I'm singing--SINGING-- singing psalm... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
this runs the gauntlet of emotions...pain anger loneliness...yet there seems to be hope too... i like this |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
WOW serenity.... so so cool.... i'm hoping (those feelings didn't last long) love your style...!  Tony [This message has been edited by T McCoy (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sing baby..sing.... sooooo sad me sweet and yes so cool too ... are ya sleeping me twin ...  me loves ya me |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sing away there girl....sing those pains away. At least there is hope in that you are singing Psalms instead of the blues....Wonderful write though it be filled with sadness. Angel's smile upon you constantly....all you gotta do is trust them. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, and your song echos symphonies on the pages of passions |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i'm right with ya lady, lovely blue words Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A soulful serenade, serenity...I loved this. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ What sweet thoughts of your singing. You're just too cool for words ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
you are way to cool for words! though words you well, are never telled, by hearts so mellow and eyes full welt, and blah, blah, blah, i just really get into your poetry, it always hits home. and singen down the ally us wild cats go. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wanted to take a moment to express my gratitude to all...didn't intend this one as a downer...more like a gamut of emotion...so thanks for reading, I am appreciative, as ever.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a gamut of emotion in a fine poem! Kathleen |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
serenity, this one is PERFECT! No cheapie here |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it does indeed run the gamut my friend. . . from sorrow to anger and from sadness to happiness. . . you'll find it. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Serenity, I've been singing all day in my heavy mind but could not put words to it until now thanks so much, one of a kind art from a master trully. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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