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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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As Promised last night the stars exploded the moon phased gave it's show rainbows fell upon the earth and lined the path with colored glow the world then ceased the way it was the kisses rained from cheeks so fair she wrestled thoughts of loving felt and treasure boxed the time they shared today she looked to take a peek and wondered if it all was true lifted lid stood back to see escaping brightness reflecting you she reached to touch the dusting glow the sprinkles landed kissed her face then with a whispered breeze of breath they traveled down to rest in place on heart she felt the warmth of night the building burn from touch of eyes then fireworks set off the sparks that ended in her deepened sighs she felt the arms that held her, 'round the scent of his still lingered near remembering his smile on lips each time she whispered in his ear how much she longed desired him his lips, the way he moved and swayed his words that captured all his feel she loved this memory of yesterday so quickly, she then closed the box to savor what remained inside lined in velvet pouched in gold 'til next time opened last night resides... M 1*2k |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"Lined in velvet pouched in gold till next time opened last nite resides" .. beautifully said!! Romance and passion entwined gracefully in this poem of your's  Coco |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
CocoBaci I am passionately romantic..the only way to be ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Maureen, Well, this is how it is. I need lessons in how to write poetry, and guess what? Yours are so lovely, romantic, sensous, caring, and .....................................!!!! That I would willingly be your student. So nice that you do write. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill, you do know that I was a teacher in my former life....and am always available for helping out if needed you are sweet to say this ~~as always, smiling Maureen |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed the spoken meter of this poem, And the word images with in. Gloom |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Maureen I don't think you meant to tell Bill that you have been reincarnated from a teacher to a poet did you? Naw.. you've always been a sweet romantic poet, you were a teacher so you could buy the pen and paper to write this beauty down... What is in that box that would make magic dust capture your heart and take you on a tender loving trip into the past? I can guess and I'll probably be close but aw heck I'd rather you just write another one to explain it then I can read it and enjoy it....take care.....ethome. my oh my you are on a roll are'nt you! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Gloom.... thank you, for your visit, I miss them when you aren't ~~softly M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
ethome....oh you had to say this didn't you E. What is in that box that would make magic dust capture your heart and take you on a tender loving trip into the past? I can guess and I'll probably be close but aw heck I'd rather you just write another one to explain it then I can read it and enjoy it.... now I will have to just do that for you won't I? My next poem I will work on it just for you ~~soft thanks for more inspiration M |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
No king has a jewel more precious or rare than the treasures we cherish in our moments alone enjoyed this Maureen |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
as did i... beautifully done, Maureen. Tony |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
you write with such heart ... beautiful work |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Rex ...cherished and treasured are almost synonymous aren't they thank you ~~soft smiles M And you too, T..thank you for stopping by..hmmm you could combine one and pen it T-Rex... couldn't you ~~sighhh don't mind me it's called sleep deprived...or is that depraved..  Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
MA ...thank you for the kind words and responses..they help make the world a brighter place...at least my little corner ~~soft smiles M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen--oops, I read this one second...but it was still grand...and I'm so glad you wrote the other, as I would have asked with ethome. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Martie..  ..I don't really know ethome..actually I really don't know any on here...but ethome was on another forum for awhile and I always enjoyed his work and the kindness he shared in replying to others..it was a joy to see him here when I was told about Passionsthank you again Maureen |
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