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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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Looking back remembering looking forward to being very forward back then when pausing kisses better than last was first next to lasting forever til parting lips to look forward to the next Back then when everything was moving in fast forward and more good days lay ahead they say and you know about they they are the ones that say because they always say about pausing the best is yet but we know looking back what best is when it was unwinding Hate is a dead thing. Who of you would be a tomb? -Kahlil Gibran |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
. . pausing the best is yet but we know looking back what best is when it was unwinding . . WOW, such an incredible flow.... muchly enjoyed this write... regards, sudhir |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hawk-man - this is really really a great read - you post some of the most complex poetry - its always a pleasure reading your work. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
back and forth and back and forth... i like this.... it's moving! hehe *wink* don't know if i'm coming or going...  seriously though, really... LOL... silly mood over here... this one makes me think... and that's a good sign considering my state of mind but you know what they say.... think or thwim... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Awesome poem! It really gets you thinking (and gets you concentrating ). Can't wait to read more. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Thankyou sudhir.. mike, my brain is so fried I think they just ooze out like grease... doreen... a little more to the left... yeah.. right there.. ahh.... lake.... don't think too hard... you know what they say... a mind is a terrible thing... so get wasted.. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
flow + ponderance + substance = greatpoem |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I think I've been where you were going now...great read!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
The wanderer returns...  Good to see read you sweetheart HUSG |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Thanks MA.... martie.... no matter where ya go... there ya are.. eh? Cindy!!! HuggsZzZzzz |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Intriguing poem. But then they all are when written by our favorite local rebel (great idea for a name). Nice to see you around again sir.  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I enjoyed the pause. Very much. And then again. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow, this poem takes you to where it is, makes you remember the kisses and the looking forward and to where we are now, to looking back...all I can say on this one is WOW....you do have a talent for this writing stuff |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Thanks all... didn't expect this one to pop back up again.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
love to see things pop up again meself (sorry just read JM and Michael G's poetry) but I did enjoy this one much--a memory ramble for me---I really like your work alot...keep 'em scrolling through me friend... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a great format and such a delightful poem..full of all kinds of truth and thought provoking plays on words...really enjoyed this read!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I seem to be constantly looking back these days... which isn't exactly improving my already sadly-lacking grace and poise. *G* This one flowed smoothly, rebellious one... great job! |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
I enjoyed the way the rhythm and phrasing really complimented the message. Lots of "style" here!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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