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Broken Glass |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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A dull mirror reflects the past No more lies from the looking glass I see in part, more clearly now Was that me? I don't see how Broken glass, broken past A new window to my soul Can you see the real me? BloomingRose |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
we can see clearly what the pain has drawn broken pasts are a specialty here nicely done hope your future is brighter  Rex |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice poem, and if your poetry is the real you we can't wait to meet you more  (gosh, that sounded a little confusing when I just read it, but I guess I'll just leave it and hit submit. I know you'll all get it ) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Rex, The pain in the past is just that. It's the past, but for some reason thoughts are coming to mind. I did not write on paper I just typed as it came to me. Good therapy I suppose. Deb Lakewalker I am glad you like the poem. Yes, what you said is a bit confusing, guess I'll get it in a minute. Deb BloomingRose |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Deb...don't you know that poetry is the best therapy there is? Sometimes it allows us to express innermost feelings we tend to hold inside. There's nothing like a bit of writing to allow at least you, if no one else to see the real you. Nice poem by the way |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
there's nothing Hoot Owl RN said I can't agree with totally - take it to heart - I've been findng catharsis in it (poetry) for 3 years now |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Can you see the real me? Loved the finish much. The past sufferings and pains we endure need to be held in our memories to remind us to be human and they help us grow in strength and character if held in the proper light. Well done |
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