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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Heart-shaped satin jewel box-- pink,a swan on top. Edged with lace, beige with age, one hinge, and broken lock. Inside--a ballerina, posed, in perfect pirouette. Lift the lid--see her spin, mirror cracks her silhouette. Turn the key, begin beguine, if only to remember when... count the pearls of years, unfurled, then wind her up again. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
serinity--this is so vivid in imagery and you have presented in perfection. Well done.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
count the pearls of years, unfurled, then wind her up again. .... O Serene One, tell me something tell me how you manage to write with such vividity in thought, clarity in mind and images to perfection... tell me how... pleaaaasssssse regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SERENITY~ This one's mine ! ! ! I have a treasured trove of old music boxes ... Timely ballerina's dance to the pleasured treasure of the music. Already printed - framed - and hung ! Oh, thank you ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Treasured pieces can hold memories so well. Very well done Serenity Rich |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
wow, serenity - this is so well written! I love the way it brings the box to such clarity - I swear I can see every detail, and yet you write so cleanly and brief! Very nicely done. Wow! |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
this is you serenity ... flooding of images ... well done ... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
and she dances.....with grace Hate is a dead thing. Who of you would be a tomb? -Kahlil Gibran |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Me too, I just have to go take a peek at mine now, it's time she danced again.. HUGS |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I envision a feeling of great sadness when I read this ... the great thing about poetry is that it can mean something a bit different to each reader very well written serenity |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
very nicely done....! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lift the lid--see her spin, mirror cracks her silhouette. Turn the key, begin beguine, if only to remember when... count the pearls of years, unfurled, then wind her up again. ========================= look...me twin...me slug let me on dont blink tho  beautiful poem me sweet... me thinks me sen will be dancing again... time to put on the pearls and the dance in the sunshine... (wearing only the pearls) he he...I miss ya baby...modem man is coming soon e-me a poem verse...lets see what comes up... poetically speaking of course  how the heat in the south... I been feeling the steam blowing in from here... *sigh* tis hurricane season ... *kiss kiss* me |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--So beautifully written and heart meaningful...loved it! |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
and oh is how this brings me two memorys of broken white ceramic, falled the birth day roses, and the dear jewlwry box so bare and lost, i kept my name ingraved with gold and the hinges to keep me tucked, i love this beautiful sweet box you have filled with words like drops of pearls. good day dear lady, i aleays learn something from reading from your book. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thank each of you for you kindness, once again...I'm so grateful that you take the time for me...a humble curtsey from serenity... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 08-11-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"oh when they begin. . . " sorry, just dancing to that song in my mind. . . wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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