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Love has no color
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Love has no color |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Even though she has white skin and I have black skin, that means nothing because, I really love her. Every place that we go, every place that we flow, somebody see our skin color, and think of us being together, is like a living sin because race mixing, is something they don't believe in. Well, I don't care, what some people may say or think because, I'm gonna stick with her, through the thickest of thin, no matter how difficult the situation, that we may be in because ever since she stepped into my life, she's reversed the wrongs to right and in the future, I plan to make her my wife, as her love shines, like a ray of light. Her golden-blond hair, and her baby-blue eyes, are only a glimpse of what truly belies because, her true beauty comes from the inside as she loves to go shopping at the mall, as all the beautiful clothes, seem to fit her like a barbie doll, as her model-like physique, is too flawless to critique. She always make me smile and I can't wait till we make a child because, it's something that we feel, will reflect the love, between her and me as we're more comfortable in public, as we sometimes start kissing and hugging, despite people glaring at us because, we've expected it, and we've accepted it. I've lost some friends over this, as my black friends get upset, when they see me with my lady, and quit talking to me as it burns me and inferiates me, that my friends can't let me be because they refuse to realize and get it in their minds, that love is color blind! People, why does your color, have to matter, in the name of love because if I'm happy, and so is she, then lei it damn be! Remember people, that God, favors no specific color, when he choses his women or men, when it's time to go to heaven so despite our different colors, lets make peace and love one another, like true sisters and brothers, because love, has no color. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I basically made this up...but for good reasons...the reason being which is to deliver a message to you....a message that I hope you will get and find helpful. Peace, Nathan |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Nate, I didn't think that you had made this up, I thought it was from personal experience, so the fact that it's fiction makes it all the more special. I love the title, the concept of no colour. Good poem..... I mean it  Linda M. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You've penned the message well Nate, the outside is merely a shell for heart and soul, how you act and how you love should speak loudest of all, Wonderful writing~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nate, this is so very true. Color never needs to matter....except to the small-minded. It's like the poem about the mother watching her son playing outside with a black neighbor child. "Was that boy black?" she asked her child When he was only three. "Gee, I don't know" the boy replied. "Next time I'll look and see" Out of the mouths of babes........ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate~ Enjoyed the post. You always make me think ... and I think you're right. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Nate, I really enjoyed this poem...Your so very true in the fact that love has no colour...as I know that from experience. Love is love...Thanks for the great read~ Blessed Be, Beth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful message Nate...I know what you mean...I'm a white guy and I love Asian women...actually I love all women...ha..ha..James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Linda, for your sweet comments. Thank you Butterflies, for your nice comments. Thank you Balladeer, for your lengthy post. Thank you Marge, for you sweet comments. Thank you Beth, for your sweet comments. Thank you Jimmy, for your nice comments. Nathan |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It's what's on the inside of a person that counts, for sure! Denise |
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topnotch707 Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16vallejo, cali, usa |
this poem reminds me of a poem i wrote myself a few years ago, i will also post it on here so you can read it. I am a white female with a black male and i also see that love has no color. I have a special bond with him that ive never had with any man before. We even plan on getting married. as long as you are happy in a relationship no matter what others say you must keep your head up and stay strong. there is also a poem i wrote called erase the visions of hate ( it is posted) I wrote it dedicated to a freind who came from africa to america and was brutally killed by racist people. I think if people thought of things the way we do there would be less hatred and racism in this world. I loved the poem and I hope to hear more about this topic. |
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courtney923 Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 43 |
Maybe you can do Heavy Mental part 2 later, if not at least keep writing these poems. This one is beautiful and romantic. Color shouldn't matter, it's the person behind it that matters. That's what made this poem so great, to me, is that you expressed that very well. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I wonder IF we were all blind would color matter so much but God gave us sight to see the beauty of all the different colors. Color doesn't matter to me so few people find true love and that's what matters. To love and be loved is the greatest gift one could ever receive. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Nate... I really am glad that you wrote this! We all need to open our eyes...to see the beauty of the individual, no matter what race. We could learn a lesson from the children....they are color-blind until we teach them differently!! Excellent job...... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Denise, for your nice comments. Thank you topnotch for your lenghty post, words of wisdom, and your thoughts on racism. Thank you Courtney, for your wonderful comments. Thank you Rosebud, for your nice comments. Thank you Sunny, for your wonderful post. Nathan |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Love knows no color nor should the world. I liked this. Jenn E |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
A good and meaningful message Nate. Thank you. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Jenny and Eloise, for your sweet comments. Nathan |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Very powerful. Though it may be fiction it sure does reflect our society. Great work once again |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
It is unfortunate that in this country it is still an issue. I wish you both the best, it won't be an easy road. Peace. Corinne |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
THANK YOU JNR4 AND CORINNE, FOR YOUR GREAT COMMENTS. Nathan |
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