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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-31 06:11 PM

Her hair flows
gentle breezes carress
bodies dressed in sunlight
temptations at rest,
complete my world
for times last sake
a kiss from heaven
that I shall keep.
In winters silence
of storms raised within
she turns her face to me
and slowly we begin,
eyes in silent rapture
as the rain gentle comes
my love in my arms tonight
for once more we are one.
Does this break our comfort
or mending hearts do tear
does this work against the tide
for what we have dared,
or simply are we human
and forever shall we love
and this last moments grace
is forever ours alone.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

1 posted 2000-07-31 07:04 PM

Who needs school, when you have this much talent!! This is an expression of emotion Michael. I like your work more and more with every poem you post.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-07-31 07:20 PM

Michael, how heart felt this is. I so enjoyed it. What a true work of beauty. Juls

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-08-01 06:40 PM

temptations at rest,
complete my world
for times last sake
a kiss from heaven
that I shall keep.
In winters silence
of storms raised within
she turns her face to me
and slowly we begin,
eyes in silent rapture
as the rain gentle comes
my love in my arms tonight
for once more we are one.
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oh man...*sigh*...
need i say more

later-MG-gator
jm

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

4 posted 2000-08-01 07:51 PM

Marina-hehe,thanks after spending money on books today I really wonder........

Juls- thankyou kind one.........

JM- aah, you know me...........

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

5 posted 2000-08-23 07:44 PM

"and forever shall we love" I think that line holds the deepest of truths.
Your writing amazes me Michael, your words, how they flow, you are a truly gifted writer.

Jenn E

ladysixstring
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 374

6 posted 2000-08-23 08:11 PM

This is terribly romantic and exceptionally beautiful!! Enjoyed very much!!

-jaimie

Website: www.ladysixstring.com

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