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| Open Poetry #9 |
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My love |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Her hair flows gentle breezes carress bodies dressed in sunlight temptations at rest, complete my world for times last sake a kiss from heaven that I shall keep. In winters silence of storms raised within she turns her face to me and slowly we begin, eyes in silent rapture as the rain gentle comes my love in my arms tonight for once more we are one. Does this break our comfort or mending hearts do tear does this work against the tide for what we have dared, or simply are we human and forever shall we love and this last moments grace is forever ours alone. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Who needs school, when you have this much talent!! This is an expression of emotion Michael. I like your work more and more with every poem you post. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Michael, how heart felt this is. I so enjoyed it. What a true work of beauty. Juls |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
temptations at rest, complete my world for times last sake a kiss from heaven that I shall keep. In winters silence of storms raised within she turns her face to me and slowly we begin, eyes in silent rapture as the rain gentle comes my love in my arms tonight for once more we are one. ===================== oh man...*sigh*... need i say more  later-MG-gator jm |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Marina-hehe,thanks after spending money on books today I really wonder........ Juls- thankyou kind one......... JM- aah, you know me........... |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
"and forever shall we love" I think that line holds the deepest of truths. Your writing amazes me Michael, your words, how they flow, you are a truly gifted writer. Jenn E |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
This is terribly romantic and exceptionally beautiful!! Enjoyed very much!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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