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Mirrored Song....A silly little poem....but, my 4,000 plus :)
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Mirrored Song....A silly little poem....but, my 4,000 plus :) |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Mirrored song The keyboard is a mirrored song do you know the words sweet tempestuous play along not the best I’ve heard It has a melody of sorts in metered thought it plays and brings to this small room a sound that in my dreams still plays ---------- In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Almost as cute as you. *L* |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Your "silly" poem brought a smile to my lips... can you believe i just posted a poem that also uses the word tempestuous???..really....check this /pip/Forum33/HTML/000753.html Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie, this is a change for you! And we like it! Congrats again! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
yep, silly songs can be a treat, Especially those from florists sweet. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Hardly silly from my POV - but then - I play on keyboards - I loved it  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Cute and sweet! Congratulations, Martie! Denise |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
recongrats... now that's a new word for me... does anyone want to add this to websters??  Martie, this was wonderful... regards, sudhir |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You are so cute, Thanks for the music Liz |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Congrats on your 4,000 Martie! I see you're trying the rhyming scheme. And doing quite well at it I might add! I heard the music <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I thought that I would never see, Martie writing rhyming poetry. But just when I thought it couldn't be, She broke through and stunned me. Martie - this is a sweet poem - you are so versatile! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Martie congrats once more on your 4000th(plus). This was cute not silly and any way you look at it is simply "Martieific". Since Sudhir came up with the great idea we can use this as a bump for a challenge. Care to start it in one of your wonderful poems...you up to it?LOL |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Martie... Many congratulations on your 4000!!! Wow.......that's a lot of postings! I loved the poem, also! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
qwerty is a purty werd but what the heck does asdf mean???? zxcv? m,./? yuiop? nice ditty martie... congrats on turning 4k... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi all...thanks for being such great friends...Mark...I'll have to think on that one...but I think you and Rebel got the ball rolling. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Don't mind me.... just playin your tune right back to the top of the poetic charts.  [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-11-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Martie,...Awesome 4000!!!~ *This is just the best little ditty to celebrate it* ~Take care you. *Peace.~  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well Im late for this party and underdressed but im here... still having puter probs... YOU KNOW I am THRILLED to see ya rhyme AGAIN and do so for your milestone post congrats sweet poet... I better get to cracking on my replies or your gonna catch up with me  later-sweet-rhymin-gator jm |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--I think you're playing my song SpitFire--Glad you liked my little ditty...and peace to you. JM---Sorry about your computer...have you tried kicking it...I'm not racing with you, no way...thanks for the great reply. |
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