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A Kiss of Ecstasy
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A Kiss of Ecstasy |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
A Kiss of Ecstasy From distance neither near nor far, _the view of her was clear. Her beauty glowed from light of moon, _as she strolled by, quite near. I watched her as she stopped by pond, _her visage, it did mirror. Then sliding off her slipper there, _to test if warm or cool. With furtive glance she looked about, _to see if lone by pool. Her probity then disappeared, _to frolic like tomfool. Done with dance, she did look about, _her privacy assured. Sensuously, she did disrobe, _almost to be demure. Long dark hair against ivory skin, _contrasting beauty pure. Wading into the still waters, _reflections danced about. In love I was from first of glance, _of this, there was no doubt. I trembled as I stood and watched, _my love, I wished to shout. To darkened end of pond I stole, _and loosed my clothes to ground. Into the cool water I slipped, _making nary a sound. I watched her swim from shadows deep, _while trying not to drown. I blinked for just a moment, then, _no where in sight was she. My eyes searched quickly all about, _I strained my eyes to see. My heart did nearly stop it's beat, _as she rose, facing me. Those hazel eyes beguiled me so, _her gaze held me spellbound. She smiled a knowing smile at me, _my heart began to pound. I tried to speak, to no avail, _I could not make a sound. She laughed as she pushed me under, _freeing me from her spell. I heard her laugh, as I found air, _sweet, like a tinkling bell. I swam toward her, quick and sure, _she feigned escape so well. Splashing, thrashing, playful fighting, _then vanished from my view. I waited as the water calmed, _a minute, maybe two. Spinning slowly round, eyes searching, _she smiled, as she said, "BOO!" Again she held me with her gaze, _this time they beckoned me. I pulled her gently in my arms, _so beautiful was she. Her lips parted, inviting mine, _a kiss, of ecstasy. Steve B 2000 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
What a fun sensual romp...you have done a fantastic job with this one..I have a picture in my bedroom of a beautiful Asian woman half way into a pond...exactly as you have described... with a waterfall and the moon in the background...long black silk hair...one of my favorites...I confess that I love Asian women...I have a lunch date with a lovely one today...must get ready soon...James [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SteveB~ Mmmmmmm ! Mmmmm ! Afternoon delight !  Beautifully done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
jmlee~ Yess ..sounds like a good pic to accompany this... I have spent time in the Far East and yes they are beautiful as most all women are... Please feel free to add my poem to your pic and share with whomever as long as my name remains as author...I also once got to visit your islands long ago... wish I was there now... thanks for your time and thoughts... Steve BMarge~ Thank you so much for your kind and very appreciated comments..Love your style in poems and remarks... Steve |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
So beautifully done that your poem painted such a vivid picture in my mind...! *fans herself* Nice! ~Artitic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Well what else can I say than bravo? This piece was great and to me it seemed like a continuation of your other piece who's title escapes me at the moment. Excellent work Steve B. Your language and rhyme sheme was great |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Steve, this is a sensual delight. (poetically speaking, of course!) I loved it. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMMM can I come swim with you? What a dream...please dont wake me |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Artistic~ it pleases me that my words please thank you so much Steve BJ~ Thank you for your time and kind words, and yes the theme was similar to Moonlight Visage, but the form different, this poem is in a modified ballad form that I use and like for telling longer stories...while Moonlight Visage is a new free form, I tried which near the end turns from rhyme to prose...thanks again for your interest.. Steve BClaire~ your kind words are always welcomeand appreciated, thank you for them and your time....Steve B Paula~ Thank you so much for your words and thoughts...and certainly you can come swim anytime.. Steve B [This message has been edited by Steve B (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very sensual and you penned it so well. Yes, it does sound like it was the kiss of ecstasy. Loved it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is the best Steve...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Steve - So beautifully expressed, I really enjoyed this Melissa~ |
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