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spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-08-09 02:19 AM

To look into a crowded room
And see no other face
You see so many people
But you are alone inside this place
The words that you are hearing
Do not speak to you in time
To keep you from the feeling
That you were left there
Just to die.

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

1 posted 2000-08-09 02:58 AM

I have been there........you capture feelings in your poems and real em in, I like that.

Jenn E

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

2 posted 2000-08-09 11:04 AM

Thank you
Jenn
Rich

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-08-09 03:01 PM

I know.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

4 posted 2000-08-09 06:50 PM

Thank you Serene
and I'm sorry that you know
Rich

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

5 posted 2000-08-09 07:02 PM

i've felt like that before...great title to go along with it and nicely writ

salooma

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-08-09 07:54 PM

Forgot about the hugs...sigh...so ((hugs))!

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

7 posted 2000-08-10 10:23 AM

thank you Salooma
life gives us many challenges. It is up to us how we handle them
((((Serenity)))
thankx

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

8 posted 2000-08-10 10:46 AM

Feeling alone in a crowd ... just know that you're not alone in these feelings. Your expression here is remarkable, Spike.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 2000-08-10 12:28 PM

Spike...it's amazing how one can feel so alone even in the face of a crowd and you've captured that moment wonderfully.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

10 posted 2000-08-10 10:28 PM

Thanks Claire and Hoot Loneliness is such a strong and silent feeling
Rich

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