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We search Nirvana
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We search Nirvana |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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We search Nirvana The breeze that sweeps the oceans roar Carries the sounds along the shore. Mixing them with the rustling leaves To fashions music through the trees. Visions feast a rainbow stage Causing shadows to engage Bringing moments of the tease To phantoms dancing on the breeze. I look in awe on natures floor Spellbound by the evermore. Listening to the magic dole Awakening my sleeping soul. But ever it does fade away It does not hold, it does not stay. It falls the sky down into why Into the upheaval of I. T'is thus we trek each savannah, Always searching for nirvana. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I like this...it falls the sky down into why |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Paula, You picked out a good line. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Visions feast a rainbow stage Causing shadows to engage Bringing moments of the tease To phantoms dancing on the breeze. I look in awe on natures floor Spellbound by the evermore. Listening to the magic dole Awakening my sleeping soul. =============== It falls the sky down into why Into the upheaval of I. T'is thus we trek each savannah, Always searching for nirvana. ================= I find nirvana in your rhyme... awesome imagery-sy-gator very cool poem sir... how did ya get to be so wise any way?  jm |
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Wolfgang Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 124Hamilton, Ont. Canada |
Got to put your mind to work on this poetry. Very artistic. Very pleasant. A keeper! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janet, Thank you cool cat. Wolfgang, Thank you old friend. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Provoked into thinking this is what I came up with... Thanks for the inspiration...  Some into high mountains go, Some into dense forests go, Some into green grasslands go, Some into deserted solitude go. All seeking nirvana, their moment with destiny, All gaining peace, their moment of tranquillity, All trying to break everyday life's monotony, Doing all this they go deep within their own soul-city... Reaching one's own soul, touching one's own spirit is gaining Nirvana indeed.... ------- Seymour, it is needless to say that I very much enjoyed reading your poem.... My regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ On the charm of your pen my day begins. Thank you for delightful phrases that enlighten. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Seymour, What beautiful images you brought to mind with this search and your pen.... Bonnie |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great writing Seymour beautiful images and delivery...just excellent!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, I knew you would understand, beautiful response. Marge, You are the cream and sugar in my coffee. *L* Bonnie, It was for the beautiful people like you. *L* Ethome. Thank you for the read and excellent. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, Sy! - awesome imagery~ Melissa~ |
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