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Clearing of the Mind Sale!! - Buy 2 Haikus and get 1 free (limited time only) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Joy thru Sorrow (Inspired by Khalil Gibran) I climb Mt. Sorrow the snowy peaks I must reach then I might see Joy Streamside Sonata Sitting by a stream lost in its maundering song thunder plays the bass Inner Beauty The beauty within Attracts the best of the earth Love that gives not takes the last is really more of a senryu Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Prometheus; These are exquisite! The third is my favorite! You are very good at this Haiku poetry. ellie P.S. thanks for your lovely responses to my writing. Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
these are ssooooooo good, and your style is well worth the read...... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'm glad I'm in time for your bargain read! This are wonderful..the last is so lovely!  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MORE MORE MORE |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
These are a wonderful read as always, glad I stopped in for the deal  |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
These are really good. I think the first one is my favorite. marcy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ SOLD ! And ... a bargain at any price ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Prometheus, Agree with all the above, enjoyed. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ohhh I love all three, ummm How much for Cash?  Wonderful as always Jamie  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Prometheus, for these I would gladly pay full price. Lovely writing. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
You have all been so kind and tolerant that I decided take it easy on you by not putting these in 3 separate posts Again thanks for your wonderful replies. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Bows yet again to the King.....I love the first one, oh what am I saying I love them all, as always......Please, never stop! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Jamie...I sometimes Haiku with poets as responses and one time they continued on all day..with me..I do believe there may have been three of us but I am the saver of all..so I can't give the proper poets their due..except to thank them and say I love all of those poets and wanted to share this group with you...especially since someone on here loves the Haiku...I will bold mine ...(but am not positive which were mine and others I will look it up later and make the necessary credits due... Sunlight bright shining Where did you go this morning? Come shine bright for me Could you be brightness With glimmering velvet eyes, And smiles on moist lips Hug me with warming, Make me notice not the clouds, Make me to be yours. Cloudy skies though dark Hold power behind the soft Colors to release Gazing into eyes A flower feeling so soft Brightening the sky Emotions will fly Pushing back the gray of day Lost in velvet eyes ~Velvet eyes~ to warm Swirling breezes to surround Cloak you in brightness Flying now swarming Swirling with lyrical voice, Emotions warming; Touching of your hair Brushing back a fallen strand Caressing with care Smiling with moist lips *Blushing* warmth rises from touch Eyes kissing your thoughts Moist eye to moist lips Cradle your head in my hands Cascading hair slips Framing velvet eyes Softly kissing parting lips In happiness cries. Eyes to eyes in pools, Reflecting wants and desires, Senses overwhelmed. Eyes see the fire, Caught in a touching caress, Reflects desire; Gazing in deep pools, Gains flames in the tenderness, Refuses to cool. Heat captures the night, Velvet blankets desires, 'Til the morning dawns. Maureen/Stannum/one more |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
From the lofty mountains to the rippling stream the trickle of love is seeded within. Beauty is truly in the eye of the beholder! Hugss <**> |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a bargain......so when is the next sale? Loved them. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'll buy a haiku If in return I get two I'll be back for more |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Wonderful job, I especially liked the middle Haiku! Thanks! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Prometheus, I loved all three, perhaps you can email me with the difference between a haiku and a senryu as I can't seem to find it. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I just read these again...I love your "thunder plays the bass" line. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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