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An Illusion
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An Illusion |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
For what reason did you lie The truth could hurt no more than this To find all that you said untrue I freely gave my heart to you It was a gift you threw away Deception was the game you played. 'Twas more than just a game to me I trusted you with all of me I believed but now I see You're only an illusion. Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
it is sad when we find out all that we knew of a person was just an "illusion".....but no matter how much it hurts to see the truth..always remember that once upon a time, even though it was an illusion, you had a smile on your face...try to hold on to small bright moments...when things go bleak. im looking forward to read more from you! ~Dawn  whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Good job! Very convincing...the pain, anger. I liked the concept too. "I believed but now I see You're only an illusion. " I just had a illusion that my spelling was correct until I posted!  Reason for correction.[This message has been edited by Alle'cram (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Peppermint~ What a truth is this ... 'The truth could hurt no more than this To find all that you said untrue' Excellent ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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