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Missing You (other suggestions for a title more than welcome...)
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Missing You (other suggestions for a title more than welcome...) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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I lie in the darkness of night A familiar twinge tugging at my heart My arms ache to hold you close My lips long to taste your kiss I listen to the soft cries of the wind Hearing your whispers carried to me Over the many lonely miles separating us My love whispers back a forlorn response I close my eyes, my thoughts on you Knowing you are thinking of me and That your love in my heart is strong Comforts me, easing me into love kissed dreams Dreams of the days that will surely come When I can finally embrace you in my arms Holding you so close, never letting go Never being alone, always having you near. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RP25~ this is sooooooooooo sweet! I really like the way it made me feel.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
SEA - Aww  I'm happy you liked it!Never lose your faith, your spirit, and never forget who you are. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RP25~ I did, very much BTW I like the title too.....it fits. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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vphantom Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 23 |
Such a beautiful poem, it makes me miss my angel even more. Sigh Vphantom ---The face is the mirror of the mind and the eyes confess the secrets of the heart. St. Jerome |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
vphantom - I'm glad you liked it |
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Spirit2572 Junior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 15 |
I like this poem. I hope you get to be with him soon. Spirit2572 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
your title is simple direct and suits the mood of your poem...which I like never say never |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Paula - Thank you I suppose the title will stay Missing You. |
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