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I think Of You
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I think Of You |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Think Of YouI feel the gentle breeze Against my face And I think of you Your warm breath Dancing on my cheek I see the bright sunshine And I think of you Your smile that can Light up the room I see the delicate clouds And I think of you Your gentle nature Your caring ways I see the raindrops falling And I think of you The tears I cry Full of joy you give me I hear the thunder And I think you The way my heart pounds When I feel your touch I see the sunset And I think of you The serene comfort I find in your arms I see the stars at night And I think you And the never ending Love you offer I think of you Night and day My heart overflowing With the love I cherish |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
talk about a complete and natural love....beautifully written........loved the throw of nature into this....but I am sort of biased as mother nature is my first love...  Great write. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark -Thank you  I'm glad you liked it. I like this one to actually |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is so heartfelt loving words... wonderful work rosepetals.. Had an enjoyable read... regards, sudhir |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rosepetals25~ this is beautiful and so full of love! I really like this a lot! -SEA |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sudhir - I'm so glad you liked it Thank you!SEA - Thanks for stopping to read |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
What can I say other then this was perfection. True love is a beautiful thing.......and your depiction of nature was so beautiful. Jenn E |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jenn - Awww.. thank you for you kind words. |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
this should be a hallmark card... ...i loved it...great writing...  Tony [This message has been edited by T McCoy (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Tony - Thank you I'm glad you liked it |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi rosepetals25, My, you do write from your heart. I can relate well to this writing, as sometimes everything that I see, reminds me of her. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill - And what a lucky woman she is to have a romantic man like you Thank you for stopping in. |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
hi rosepetals, "I think of you" is beautifully written. I especially like the way the line, "I think of you" ties the whole poem together and accentuates the importance of that message. I can relate with this poem because of my long distance relationship. Nice job, it was wonderful |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
JenR4eva - Thank you. For the time being, I too am in a long distance relationship so I know exactly how you feel. Thank you for stopping into read |
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