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Poor Me |
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Torn New Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 9Williamson |
Poor old twisted me, Who feasts on sympathy Who chews on suffer,on agony Who swallows whole the pain Who drowns without a sea Whose lungs fill with sorrow and misery Who inhales the deep dark blue Oh woah is me I'm such a burden to be Poor mistreated me...... I finally reach the shore Survived the storm Now I'm bare and cold The sea was warm So warm, I bathe my soul again It's good to feel, my friend Oh woah is me Im' such a burden to be Poor Twisted Me |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i thought it was gonna be sorta a pity party but it really wasn't i liked it alot Who drowns without a sea i liek this line *dreamy* Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Welcome to passions... well written...the words seem to flow frm the heart take care If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome to Passions, where "twisted" is the norm!!! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Tom! I hope you'll find some happy shores to dock along here ... hope to read more!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Torn, This was the best poor me I have ever heard and this will have to go the refrig. the place of works of art, so much enjoyed and welcome to passions, I look forward to more in the future. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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David D Junior Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 19 |
Great first post. Posted my first last night. Keep it up. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I like it!!! Poor you with a twist. You will like it here......... Jenn E |
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