Open Poetry #9 |
Colors of You |
MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Colors of You Upon a soft breeze, come thoughts adrift, entering mind, to dance away my fears. Each morning I awake, with dawn's bright face, leaving it's kiss, of morning dew.... and with it, colors of you to enrich my shaded world. I reach out greedily to capture, to absorb. Craving but enough black to darken my nights. Thirsting a trace more white to brighten the days. Wanting a rainbow of you to walk hand in hand in dreams of velvet softness. Wandering endless paths seeking the familiar, to fall into your world of tomorrows, yesterdays and todays. Wanting to sense your eye movements trailing my every touch. Your silent voice humming passionate thoughts, inciting desire in each escaping breath. For when the rhythm of dark melts and binds two hearts, the quickening beats echo through the night. I am the mystery in your dark. You are the anticipation of my night. Our shapes touch, merge, fold, surrender, feeding upon the kisses that reign 'til the flooding subsides, Leaving nothing but myst and the whispers of silence, to color us in the comfort of each other. Maureen 6*2k |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Maureen, a very beautiful poem. WOnderful tender images Wanting a rainbow of you to walk hand in hand in dreams of velvet softness. Wandering endless paths seeking the familiar, to fall into your world of tomorrows, yesterdays and todays. Wanting to sense your eye movements trailing my every touch. Your silent voice humming passionate thoughts, inciting desire in each escaping breath. I am the mystery in your dark. You are the anticipation of my night. Our shapes touch, merge, fold, surrender, feeding upon the kisses that reign 'til the flooding subsides, "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen, Holy smokes, now you have done it. One after another you write, and I don't know which one I like better. I guess I will just have to like them all, as I do. This below just hit me right in the heart! Magnificent! 'leaving it's kiss, of morning dew....' |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill...a little secret..some were written last month before I came here..I think I mentioned I can write 3 a day at least (for the last 18 months) so I have a never ending supply... and a new audience to hopefully enjoy some special ones while I prefer to take some time to respond to the other's on here... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Brian thank you..I live and see these images and they touch my mind daily ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ You remind me so much of someone I know - Tee-Hee ..... I think we've known each other through our poetry for over a year now ... I'm going to forward the first e-mail I ever got from you to you when I'm done here. I think you'll be surprised to see that it was one year old on August 1. Who'd a thunk it ? Thanks for being a friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MMoonchild, Enjoyed the read, nice work. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marge I am sure you are correct and it was Denise that we had in common that was the day before my 29th wedding anniversary... I hope she is well...I have gone to lovingyou several times but they deleted over 300 of my poems in their changes and I can't adjust to them..but when I was making those top tens along with you and her it was a real treat wasn't it...and like I said my mom asked when was I coming to Florida..I never did go since that time I had planned to come and meet you two..I have sort of become homebound of my own will..and am trying to leave the house but see no reason to except one friend that I care to see when I get the chance..and with everyone else it is funeral after funeral...and I just can't handle any more at this moment...instead of becoming stronger I have become the reverse but am hoping to change that with more positive people surrounding me...you still have that email? I had to delete all mine I had too much stored on here.. ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Seymour, thank you for reading and your nice comment ~~softly Maureen |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful piece mmoonchild...brought a smile, and warm thoughts...thanks... jwesley |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
jwesley hmmmm a smile and warm thoughts..a wonderful combination, thank you ~~softly Maureen |
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