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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-06 02:53 PM




Dream Me Your Lullaby

She dances to voices of midnight wish
A desire inside her fans flame
Reaches your heart to touch with your mind
As her whispers are calling your name


"Can you hear", she cries in shadows of moon
Awaiting an answer through breeze
"Sing me your song of your visions of dreams
Release my desires with ease


Dream me your lullaby soft and sweet
Arouse me in whispers of sin
Sip on the memories of yesterday
Hide child, bring out woman within"


Fly her to heights never reached before
Pools of blue limitless skies
Stretching her arms and enveloping all
Embracing and touching, she ~sighs


"Fill me, this void", she whispers through air
Hoping her words drift towards you
"Satisfy hunger and thirst for this love
And feast upon us, passions, two."


M*99



© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2000-08-06 03:02 PM


Wow!  Maureen...What a lullaby...so sultry, yet soft...beautifully written words...loved it!
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2 posted 2000-08-06 03:48 PM


Maureen~
A lovely lullabye.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MMoonchild
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3 posted 2000-08-06 04:31 PM


thank you Martie I was a poet of the month last year and had to do some audio poems and this was one I did...it's on my website too...I learned so much by having to have a webpage...makes the poems so real.
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-08-06 04:33 PM


thank you Marge..
~~soft smiles
M

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-08-06 04:52 PM


A beautifully sweet and tender lullibye Maureen ... just lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-08-06 09:23 PM


well if I can't have one sung to me then I will  dream one..
~~soft smiles
Maureen
*thanks Kit *wink

poutprincess
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7 posted 2000-08-07 06:03 AM


oh i agree....a very beautiful lullaby..this one will be in my head and heart for awhile!
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

MMoonchild
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8 posted 2000-08-07 06:36 AM


Dawn...thank you...such a pretty name for a poutprincess....people wake to your morning surprises every day...hmm a new poem on the rise

~~soft smiles
Maureen

Steve B
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9 posted 2000-08-07 11:23 PM


Any that could not hear
such beautiful words
and thoughts as these,
is surely deaf!

lovely..  thanks  S.

MMoonchild
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10 posted 2000-08-08 12:00 PM


thank you Steve for your kind words
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Jamie
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11 posted 2000-08-08 12:03 PM


Your poems never disappoint.
Beautiful as is always the case.



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



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12 posted 2000-08-08 01:05 AM


Sultry, soft, and completely gorgeous...I am in awe.  Wonderful work!  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

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13 posted 2000-08-08 01:55 AM


One can certainly drift away in this
very nicely written

MMoonchild
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14 posted 2000-08-08 09:13 AM


Jamie
...thank you for your kind words..they are greatly appreciated
~~soft hugs
Maureen


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MMoonchild
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15 posted 2000-08-08 09:30 AM


Princess of Dawn..you can hear me  read this if you like ...  let it load ... it  can freeze up  your computer...let it load  and then cliclk on the arrow
http://www.geocities.com/mmoonchild1/audiodreamme.html

or   this is the site where I was poet of the month...it has to  play through once usually then  click on the start (very irritating how it does that  for some and not for others...*s  have fun
http://www.fortunecity.com/victorian/kapoor/956/maureen/maureen6.html


{{hugs}}
Maureen



MMoonchild
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16 posted 2000-08-09 01:43 AM


Alwye, thank you for your sweet comments
~~soft smiles
Maureen

darn that 26  was an ugly faced icon I am sorry I  must have hit the wrong numbers    had  to edit whenI saw that



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Jenn E
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17 posted 2000-08-09 01:57 AM


Sighs....Awwww, What a beautiful sweet lullaby to read before I drift off to be with the one I love. Very nice indeed.  
Jenn E

MMoonchild
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18 posted 2000-08-09 10:37 AM


Rex Allen McCoy

were you driftin lately...hmmmmmm that's a dreamy thought  isn't it
~~smiling
Maureen

Eddie de Jong
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19 posted 2000-08-09 11:12 AM


The passion and desire are expressed equisitely.  
E

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20 posted 2000-08-09 11:57 AM


I enjoyed every word.  This was so beautifully romantic.

Michael




MMoonchild
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21 posted 2000-08-09 01:50 PM


thank you Jenn E
so sweet of you to say so
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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22 posted 2000-08-09 06:31 PM


awwww  Eddie you "blush me"
~~softly smiling a thank you
Maureen

Salooma
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23 posted 2000-08-09 06:34 PM


another beautiful post, i love the way you make them so breezy and calm and so interesting. loved it....keep em comin'  

Salooma

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24 posted 2000-08-09 08:49 PM


Auguste

thank you Michael...I appreciate your  reading and stopping to comment
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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25 posted 2000-08-09 09:28 PM


Salooma

what a sweet thing to say
thank you
~~soft hugs
Maureen

Bill Charles
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26 posted 2000-08-09 09:34 PM


Hi Maureen,
Everytime I come by, I read the excellance of a master. I sit in wonderment of your writings and your talent.

MMoonchild
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27 posted 2000-08-09 10:02 PM


not true ...thanks  except for the niceness of your words always..
~~smiles
Maureen

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