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Let's Make Sweet Love
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Let's Make Sweet Love |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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The first light's creeping it's revealing my true feelings out of the night. It's just that moment a special moment...the time's right. I reach out for you and I explore you one more time. Why go on sleeping the new day's fleeting and life is calling we can get high. Let's make sweet love bathe in the warmth of sweet love the time is right for it let's make romance and fly away with it. Let's do it up right and make love in the new light precious we know it is where we can fly when we make love like this We'll fly to the sun with each other on the wings of sweet love we'll discover. Let's make sweet love bathe in the warmth of sweet love now is the time for it the day is young let's make sweet love. let's make sweet love......... |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Romantic poem. Very sweet. Great work!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~ethome, A very loving and romantic poem. Great piece! Beth~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Xeonox and Beth I'm glad you liked it. |
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sosweet82 Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 17Phoenix, AZ |
Very very very good! I loved it. You where right there are good ones out there. You sound as if you are one! Samantha |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Samantha I'm sure you are going to find one of your own soon. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Oh early morning love is so delicious! Great poem  "A clay pot sitting in the sun will always be a clay pot. It has to go through the white heat of the furnace to become porcelain." --Mildred W. St |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes Tess it truly is delicious...thanks for stopping in to read. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
We'll fly to the sun with each other on the wings of sweet love we'll discover. Let's make sweet love bathe in the warmth of sweet love now is the time for it the day is young let's make sweet love. let's make sweet love......... Wonderful and lifting write. Your words tie together so nicely as send this romantic imagery our way......and you are right those early morning sessions are the best. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Beautiful ethome. Nothing quite like early morning romantic encounters Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Ohhhhhhhhhhh ..... Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaah ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ooooooooohhhhhhhh my sweet E...if this dont read like a tune BEGGING to be sung by Van.... none ever will LOOOOVE this verse!!!! my turn to give you a tune.... Crazy Love I can hear her heart beat for a thousand miles And the heavens open every time she smiles And when I come to her that's where I belong Yet I'm running to her like a river's song Chorus: She give me love, love, love, love, crazy love She give me love, love, love, love, crazy love She's got a fine sense of humor when I'm feeling low down And when I come to her when the sun goes down Take away my trouble, take away my grief Take away my heartache, in the night like a thief Yes I need her in the daytime Yes I need her in the night Yes I want to throw my arms around her Kiss her hug her kiss her hug her tight And when I'm returning from so far away She gives me some sweet lovin' brighten up my day Yes it makes me righteous, yes it makes me feel whole Yes it makes me mellow down in to my soul Van Morrison |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bathe me in sweet love..a wonderful thought E....now where is my "sweet" hiding this morning... ~~soft smiles Maureen love that phrase may have to borrow it today..you will see...will credit you E. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Mark and Prometheus glad you stopped in for the morning session always nice to hear from you both. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge what an exuberant reply! I loved it thanks Marge...I can't tell you to be good because I don't want you to be. Janet..I love that song I love how he changes his voice to make it so mellow and what great lyrics...thanks for your comment sweet poetess always welcome. Moonchild you can borrow whatever you want and I hope you find a way to bathe in the warmth of some sweet love. Now I've got to let you all in on the funny part of this poem. I was feeling quite amourous one morning and I wrote this poem....well, I took it right back to the bedroom and woke her up to read it to her...well, she looked at me with those beautiful sleepy green eyes that I have become so familiar with and then she reached up and pulled my face down to hers, planted the most beautiful kiss on my lips and said, "that's why I love you so much dear!" then she rolled over and went back to sleep. What could I do ?? I'd been outsmarted again! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Ethome, OK now, where did you say that special place to meet was? Please send directions. What a great sensuous writing, glad that I came by. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
But ethome---did you sing it to her? It does have a melody, I could hear it. Oh yes, Sunday mornings are so sweet and your poem is delicious!!  |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Oh, How beautiful and romatic. Morning love is indeed a wonderful thing. Jenn E |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Bill I have'nt heard from you in a while good to read your words and thanks. Martie that's where I made my mistake I should have put it into a song..oh well I'll know better the next time..thanks for the comments I appreciate them. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh, how beautifully you have written of those lazy, loving mornings.... Bonnie |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AAWWWWW ethome how could she? maybe you should have put action to words...beautiful never say never |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Jenn E and Bonnie I glad you appreciate the mood it really is a wonderful happening..thanks again. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Paula I'll remember that for one reason or the other......thanks again.. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ethome, very romantic indeed loved it |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Dark Angel for dropping in to read. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very loving and romantic..definitely the type of poem to fire-up the passion. Nathan |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
how romantic is this! very nice, but i gotta agree it does have this melody, it stands out veery much so.... great anyhow...hope to read more salooma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Nathan glad you found it so. Thanks very much Salooma for the kind words and the melody comment. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Ethome, You scored a homerun with this one. I very much enjoyed the romantic quality. Michael |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Lewis~wonderful write as always. 440Steve B |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Michael glad you could stop in to read. Thank you Steve for your very kind comment. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such sweet and tender thoughts ... makes me want to head right back under the covers! Beautifully romantic Ethome! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Oh yes, what a wonderful poem. Makes me wish.......... beautiful!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Kit and Marsha for your comments I really appreciate them so much.... |
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