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Change of Seasons |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Change of Seasons (sorry but yet another haiku) Just one season known then came you to warm my soul and rekindle life is there a haikuers annonymous???...rofl Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ Do not apologize for your mastery of this popular poetic art form. Lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is lovely! It really flows..and I think you're right, a Haiku is a 'snapshot' type poem....a beautiful picture in a few words.  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Yes, it is as if a moment's reflection, suspended, placed delicately for us to enjoy...thank you, this is quite lovely! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie this is softly beautiful  I love your Haiku's .. .keep em coming and I'll keep reading |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Never be sorry for something you are so good at. I have read more before I was a member and I loved them. So much said, so few words......I thought I had read somewhere that you were the "Haiku King"......Stand proud kind sir! Jenn E |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Jamie.... Looks like we all agree...... Keep the Haiku going!!! You're good at it, and there is a real art to make such statements in such simple forms..... So, personally, I will never tire of your beautiful Haiku!!< !signature--> I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jamie this is so lovely...and I sure dont mind because its not just "ANOTHER" haiku never say never |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I thank each of you for your kind tolerance of my haikus. When you are begging me to stop I will paste these post as a reminder that they were welcome.....lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Change of Seasons Just one season known then came you to warm my soul and rekindle life Springtime, Summer, Fall Winter, in the life of time Can't compare to you sorry I love Haikus too...and without permission from a friend who accompanied me on this writing...I will share Yellow butterfly Spreads wings on purple lilac Winds blow west, softly Capturing the flow Landing, hiding within the arms Forsythia caught Yellow on purple Lightly touches the beauty Yellow on yellow Kiss of the sunlight Exposing a slight flutter A warm breeze awaits Spring's sweet temptation Glorious consummation Called Butterfly love Consumed by the glow Butterfly dances the love Tasting sweet nectar Wells deep within Earth And higher than Sky, where sounds Ebb go shine Moon-side Soft side of the moon Reigns light upon the nightlife Releasing in sighs MMoonchild |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very good Prometheus a craft I have'nt attempted yet.......I like how the first line sets this one up...... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jamie, don't ever be sorry for haiku... to me it seems like one of the most skilful form of poetry. and your mastery over that form speaks volumes about your poetic skills.... keep 'haiku'ing and maybe one day I will be able to join you (inspired by your poems) in that form of poetry as well... oops almost forgot... this is another beautiful haiku... keep them coming regards, sudhir |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Mmoonchild--- those are beautiful... ethome--thanks, i appreciate it. sudhir-- I keep looking and expecting to see one from you anytime.....lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oops, missed this, well no, I guess I just didn't see it the first time around, for missed it I have not... Well done! |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
what a season life is..mmmm..... hugsss <**> |
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