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Open Poetry #9

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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-05 06:14 PM

the profits of time have collapsed
to picture my hearts last beat
of times I share, and those I want
but may never know for time has come.
to take way what I fear I know
my souls passion of mind that glows
to see the oceans blend in me
the tireless light from the moons beam.
of rythms we share and felt as one
as bodies molded to our hearts undone
which brought me to this lasting peace
the one I need to speak of thee.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-08-05 07:05 PM

my souls passion of mind that glows
to see the oceans blend in me
the tireless light from the moons beam.
of rythms we share and felt as one
as bodies molded to our hearts undone
which brought me to this lasting peace
the one I need to speak of thee.
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yep... this is just what I'm talking about

so very poetic and perfect
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2000-08-05 07:24 PM

Michael-This is sweet poetry with a capital "S" and "P". Wonderful write and a pleasure to read. How about "Lasting Peace" for a title? That is if you are looking for one.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2000-08-05 09:48 PM

Michael, your talent blows my mind!!!

What were you thinking of when you let me write you??? LOl

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

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