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You Still Come Around (Inspired by JamesLee)
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You Still Come Around (Inspired by JamesLee) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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You Still Come Around ~*Marge Tindal*~ Though you may be long gone For you had to move on You still come around in my dreams In moments of slumber into my thoughts you wander You still come around in my dreams You're not really here but the memories are near cascading you into my dreams In quietude of nightly scenes you move so softly through my dreams Awakening with the fear you are no longer here I retreat to the land of my dreams My comfort is found having you still around Welcome to the land of my dreams *Inspired by JMLee12345's 'In Dreams' Thank you, my friend. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Marge.....what would we do without our dreams?? I'm a dreamer, asleep and awake.....so this one really took hold of me!! Beautiful!!!!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge.. those dreams keep coming around and the effect they have is unconditional with the heart....the heart rules in the land of dreams where it's just a step between reality and the dreams of the heart. Wonderful writing Marge! You got it right! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Marge, Another masterpiece you have penned, and yes, we all can dream. Thank you Marge, this is a truly wonderful piece. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hold's breath and reads again... "In quietude of nightly scenes you move so softly through my dreams" Oh boy..... Why couldn't I think of that instead of only dreaming it?..  Superb lines here Marge, superb ! HUSG "If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ Like you, I'm dreaming with my eyes wide-open. I just have to thank James again for the one-liner that inspired this dream state. ETHome~ When dreams meet reality ... I'm rooting for DREAMS ! Bill~ Thank you. I love the setting of dreams too. RainbowGirl~ Exhale, girl ! Thank you for a 'superb' reply. Now - Dream On ! *HUSG* right back at you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
I loved this Marge! Wonderful as is everything you write! Kelly  < !signature--> You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things [This message has been edited by Kellsue (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, there I was, Marge, in your dreams, just floating overhead While staring at your loveliness there lying on the bed Your vision made my spirit rise to see you stretched out there. It rose so much I had a hard time floating in the air!!! I wanted to drop from the air and settle by your side Then put my arms around you, dear, and take you for my bride And tell you you're the only one that my heart will adore But I am forced to say instead, "Forget it, Marge! You snore!!!"  |
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Vaporous One Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 35 |
Very dreamy poem, Marge. I liked!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KellSue~ Thank you. So nice to see you. VaporousOne~ Thank you for a dignified reply ... such as Balladeer has not seen fit to do ! BALLADEER~ The only 'rise' you get comes from your latest Viagra refill !  Okay, Mr. Almost-President ... Go ahead and expose your shorts before the campaign has gotten off the ground. I smell Vienna Sausages in here !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Beautiful...dreams are what makes the workd spin never say never |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Yeah, But that's only if someone notices I'm looking... Then I'm kinda caught. Good work "M" you still got that touch. I just finished the "e" and will get it off to you tonight or tomorrow. Love and Caring Lucky Dale |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, I love this rhyming pattern, I'll have to try it sometime. It makes for a beautiful poem Well done Liz |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Marge, THis was lovely. Dreams are wonderful things, a place to relive memories and you captured this so well. "A clay pot sitting in the sun will always be a clay pot. It has to go through the white heat of the furnace to become porcelain." --Mildred W. St |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Marge, As soon as I saw your post I had to come and feast on the words I knew would be there. Gourmet poem! Linda M. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh Marge like you need me to inspire you...ha..ha..ha.. But now that you have said those lovely words I thank you very much for saying them and as always it is nice to be appreciated...Hugs and kisses from James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge has no fear of losing her muse Not even miss it when it takes a hike It is the muse of life the one she will use And pen a beauty...one we all will like Wisdom and grace are close to her hand Wit and fun join in her little dance To write a verse that will sweep the land All she needs is a moment to chance. Your dreams have got to keep you awake at night.....they seem so busy and your muse is like a scout....searching into even the smallest of things....(carpet samples for one)LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ The dreams do take us where we want to be, don't they ? Thank you for your reply. Lucky~ Hi, luv. Good to see you in the hours of your musing. Will anticipate the 'e'... Elizabeth~ Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed. You know me ... it flies to the page and there it lays. It finds it's own pattern. Glad it appeals to you. Tess~ Seems that 'dreams' are the plans of the night ... waiting for a place to happen. Thanks for enjoying. Linda~ Oh, so pleased to be your breakfast companion. Thank you. James~ We always need someone to feed our inspiration. I'm pleased to know you enjoyed it. I may never have had that particular thought had I not found it in your poem. Thank you again. MarkB~ LOL @ your wit ! And your talent. Thank you, my friend. Gosh, Mark ... I don't have time to 'search' for inspiration, as the muses keep bringing me more than I can handle. But, you know I love the morsels I find and am so happy to be able to share them. *Hugs* to you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marge...like me..I don't think you ever run out of poetry...it's our minds that just have to keep on the move..and everything around us can inspire and create in us a want to express...kind of a lovely thing to have inside us isn't it? ~~softly hugging you Maureen |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Oh Marge, Soooooo perfect this is! LOL@ Balladeer and viagra  The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
~ O' to sleep, perchance to dream... ~ Enchanting reverie you share, Miss Marge...thank you! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ Oh, yes ! But the nicest thing about writing is being able to share. Now, THAT'S my inspiration ! Jeffrey~ You sweetie ! *HUG* Claire~ And you, my friend, are more than welcome. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
hi Marge---seems I'm late with this one...I've been sleeping...what a lovely poem and dream ...thanks for sharing! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Hi there, West Coast Sis .... you guys are always 'late' .... Tee-Hee ! Let's share a cup of coffee and some great poetry ! Love knowing you're there ! Good morning, Taylor ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Marge, Ethome said it better then I. This poem I felt closer to my heart then I can explain. Very true it is. I to find lately I am dreaming with my eyes open.........as well as in the night. Thank You for this. Jenn E |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JennE~ What sweet comments. I hope that you find much hope in the dreams that greet your night ... I love dreamy thoughts ... day or night. And that 'reality' thing ... is just gonna have to come along for a ride on my dreams. Thanks for your wonderful reply. The soul-mate of my life lives in Canada, in the Ontario area of Dunnville. Have a happy day ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
In quietude of nightly scenes you move so softly through my dreams Awakening with the fear you are no longer here I retreat to the land of my dreams My comfort is found having you still around Welcome to the land of my dreams .... This is perfection in poetry, Marge. ...WOW what a theme - land of dreams... ... DREAM ON ... meet you in one of the dreams at a dreamy spot 'neath moony skies regards sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Thank you, sweet man, for your considerate reply. The moon-filled night holds many a hand and heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
LOVELY,MY FRIEND ENJOYED IT A LOT. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Marge~~This was very good....A lot of things can come back to haunt you in your dreams... Very well expressed..... Julie :) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VAnDana~ Thank you, my little friend. JulieAnn~ I don't feel 'haunted' .... but 'surrounded' fits the bill ! So glad you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Chase the dream, never let it die.. Without a dream your soul is denied No matter the hurt sorrow or pain A dream will always make you whole again. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hey Marge, beautiful poem!! This rubbishy verse is an adaption from the second poem I ever wrote, hence the pathetic-ness!!! But I really loved this poem of yours, Just like I LOVE dreams!!! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ I love seeing you here soooooooo much ! Thanks for taking the time and that verse has LOVELY possiblilites. Hope you get the opportunity to 'polish' it ! Love you ...... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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