Open Poetry #9 |
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this is my last resort |
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acidic angel Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 12winnipeg, canada |
(are we not allowed to post images with our poems? sorryyy i posted my button a couple times.. oopsie.) peering into the looking glass cannot see in this dim light feels like we're all drowning wandering through this endless plight the world is so apathetic and it obscures the reality of day i wonder why things don't slow down it keeps pushing me on this way screw you, i don't care if i'm jaded at least i follow on my own terms i'm not a slave to society it's this inside that burns don't judge me for what you see i've got more intellect that you would expect but like it really matters because you opinion would seem to reflect you can't understand this feeling seems to be the retort you think i'm being 'immature' but this is my last resort.. **i don't take very kindly to censorship. actually i despise it. it ruins the apparent beauty and symbolistic meaning of so many different art forms. but. in this case i've decided to remove the profanity in this poem because this isn't my webpage. and although i also don't take kindly to authority i respect the wishes of the administrators.** ## clickity click! ## [This message has been edited by acidic angel (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This is a great poem. Why do not many of us rebel for we are afaraid. Thank you for sharing. ![]() Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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