Open Poetry #9 |
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Death Rides A Horse |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas ![]() |
Death Rides A Horse The warrior counted coup stripping his enemies lives away like so many leaves on the ground, slashing through flesh and bone till they lay dead and stacked all around. A dead one here a dying one there, his war cry curdled blood, raised hackles and hair as he fought with a fierceness never seen before, as if the devil gnawed at his core. Tall, bronzed, covered in blood, he blocked a lance, parried a knife, grunted in pain, drove his blade home; the last one standing, tall and alone, he clutched at the wound high in his side, went to his horse, and mounted to ride. Far from his teepee, his wife, his kind, head down, back bowed, the proud, mighty warrior, gasping from the wounds treacherous bite, grimaced and said, "Death rides a horse this night". W. James Beard, Jr. [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
YES!!!!!!!*s m i l e* ummm... could you tell i liked it??? good to read the depth of this.... thank you!!!!!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool JW..very very cool.. excellent imagery and weave... enjoyed this much take care jm |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Wow ! Struck with awe and tender reverence of thought. Thank you, friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks much - for the words Doreen and JM. You guy's read the first write...this is now the final wirte - I think. And Doreen, sounds like you may have seen the two deaths there...the indian representing death; then death himself come for his due. Thank you too Marge my friend - You I think read the rewrite...anyway...if it's was as is now then you did...you were nip and tuck on the change. jwesley |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
jwesley, I really like this one ![]() rosepetals25 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great story.. wonderful trip....enjoyed the read very much...keep up the great work!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
loved everything about it!!! a great read! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Much thanks, rosepetals25, ethome and serenity. Appreciate your time. jwesley |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
You've depicted the intensity, the drama here VERY well, and your format is perfect for this tale. Excellent writing, to my way of thinking. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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