Open Poetry #9 |
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Getting Away |
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BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
Walking leisurely through the deep peaceful forest, I am one with nature. So attuned to everything around me. I notice a little brown mouse as it darts across my path, quickly scurrying back to its home underneath the deteriorating log nearby. I sit down at the base of a shady oak tree, to quietly partake of the beauty and the serenity surrounding me. I hear the chatter of two squirrels, as they playfully chase each other amongst the limbs above. I listen, and in the distance I hear the sound of a mourning dove, as it calls longingly for its mate. I arise and continue upon my way. I haven't traveled far, when I stumble upon a sparkling clear pond, hidden within the depths of this pristine forest. As I watch quietly, a deer emerges from the forest and cautiously approaches the pond. It lowers its magnificent head to drink of the crystal clear water. Its thirst quenched, it slowly wanders back into the shadows of the forest from which it came. Deciding it's time to head back home, I turn and proceed out of this natural wonder, stopping to say a silent goodbye to this small piece of God's country. "If you love someone, set them free. If they come back to you, they're yours. If not, they never were to begin with." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Like a "guided meditation", could practically hear every foot-fall, much like sunrise at my house...rabbits scamper at the edge of the wood, and owl flies home at crack of dawn, as if he'd heard, "last call..." |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BamaPoet~ You thoughts are just perfect 'sun-catchers' to hang in the window of those who do not have these lovely sights to gaze upon. I live in just such an astounding place and wish everyone could take a walk through the serenity of nature. Thank you for sharing this piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi BamaPoet... How I love writings on nature!!! I live in Alaska, with forest all around, peace and quiet. My favorite all time thing is to do everything you wrote about here....just sit and observe nature. This was a wonderful work to read!!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
Thanks everyone, I could feel MYSELF there also. LOL! |
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