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Making Movies With You (for someone special) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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I lay there in utter disbelief With my head upon your breast Contemplating happiness, thinking Is this life at it's best? I feel your gentle fingers Running through my hair And I know that love is real Cause I can feel it there You lean down to kiss my lips And I breath your essence in Holding you so tight and warm Now there's goosebumps on my skin So nervous in this situation Yet, not wanting to let go The mere touch of your sweet lips Sends shivers from head to toe In the background TV playing quietly As your back arches at my touch Of all the things of my life Never wanted anything so much |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Making PopCorn here ! And you just melted the butter !  Delightfully, sensually tender ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Jeffrey, such a succulent scene you've set before your reader. Lovely. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL at Margie..tsk tsk  my my my jeff-gator... this is toasty and tasty... and emotionally blissfull... love ya when your sensual later-in-love-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Soft, sweet, and romantic scene you have filmed here my friend. Very nice writing. I like this one. Don't think it gets much better than that. Jenn Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
OH this was so lovely, warm and sweet.........This was great mind movie, I must go now...and play it again.... Jenn E |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Geez Marge, POPCORN! While JC's doing this!? I don't think so! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
OMGGGG Close the blinds!!!! Thanks Marge....LMAO Claire.....I didn't do it (grin) JM.....Can you believe that Marge was peeking in my window? LOL Jenn......thank you Jenn E (not to be confused with Jenn).... my memories are my movies, and this one gets 2 thumbs up Sunshine.....I couldn't believe it....Marge of all people looking in my window LMAO Marge , you know I love ya and I'm only picking on you don't you? Good....LOL |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
Hey this is great< !signature--> [This message has been edited by Kyle aka Huck (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
SSSSIIIGGHHHHHHHHH.... never say never |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey, darlin'~ I openly admit to being a Peeping-Marge ! Honey, the scenes are just so REAL TO REEL ! Hoping to catch the re-runs ! Thanks for leaving the blinds open ! ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marge, I'll leave them open for you anytime darlin' See ya' same time next dream |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Where do I get a ticket to this movie? Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Kay-lynn, all you gotta do is ask.....which you just did .......so here ya go  |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
YOu've did your magic once again such passionate words are so amazing. That they would come from your heart and through your fingers.Very graceful and so romantic. |
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Diana Kessler Junior Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 24U.S.A. |
Hot! Very hot! Great talent here. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Now you have me thinking about kissing a certain woman...no not just a kiss....a long passionalte sensual kiss...touching, breathing, smelling, feeling the sensations...James |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
This isn't the real Chris responding, I'm his evil twin... the one who likes sweet, warm, caring people. Jeffrey, this rocks I love it man! You truly have a gift for the namesake of our home here... Passion. Chris (the evil twin Chris) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Rosebud.......I only wrote what I felt Diana.........Thanks and Welcome to Passion's James.........Oh yeahhhh...that's my kind of kiss LOL and last but certainly not least Christopher....whichever one you are, you have certainly made my day with this reply.......and btw, I still think that you are the infamous Bruce LOL |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
ok.. im using my ticket to bump it back to the top.!.. (smile) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey thanks man...now I know what to watch on my next date. Sensuous and much much too hot for the young at heart.  *Marge- may I see some I.D. please? |
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