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Open Poetry #9

Floating Away

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2000-08-04 05:53 PM

there's a mote
just floating,
drifting
in the sunlight

with a feathery sweep
see her weave
her dream

just for you

and the whole world
is waiting

just open
the green door

and step
slowly
out

[This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-05-2000).]

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

1 posted 2000-08-04 09:00 PM

~~~~~~
Oh how I love the softness, Allan
of these words you post, display.
A speck, I see in drifting sunlight
wakens me in dreams this way.
It softly lands within my sight
to catch my thoughts and drift away.
Oh how I love this softness, Allan
of the words you penned today.
~~~~~~~~

~~thank you
Maureen

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

2 posted 2000-08-05 04:08 AM

Thank you so much. I'm lost for words. Allan

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

3 posted 2000-08-05 04:13 AM

Ahhh can that be, a poet lost for words..I doubt it
~~soft smiles
Maureen

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2000-08-05 07:01 AM

I agree with the moonchild Alan...tender smooth work......very well done!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2000-08-05 08:41 AM

and I LIKE the little floatie things...LOL alan....

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

6 posted 2000-08-09 01:59 PM

I'm already on my way. The temptation is too great!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

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