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linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
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Adelaide, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-31 12:26 PM


"Leafy Lofts"


Flutter in the breeze
Dappled leaves on stately trees
Bowing to the sun


Linda M.


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linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-31 03:21 AM


Marge,
Just checking if the post reply works, as you said it wasn't working for you.
As you can see, I can post a reply.
Thanks for letting me know of a potential glitch.
Linda M.

linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
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2 posted 2000-07-31 09:03 PM


Marge has asked me to make her reply for her as her pc won't let her post a reply here for some strange reason, known only to cybergremlins.  Marge said so !  

Here is her response:

Lovely Haiku sings
Of branches in the treetops
Breeze blows leaves about

~*Marge*~

Nate Dogg
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3 posted 2000-07-31 09:27 PM


A gentle and beautiful haiku. Thumbs up for your first Haiku as you've past the test with flying colors.
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4 posted 2000-09-04 08:54 PM


linda,i think this was a fine first attempt and will be looking forward to more haikus from you
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