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Kyle aka Huck
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since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA

0 posted 2000-08-04 12:37 PM


All the times we've ever faught,
I never even thought,
I'd be down on bended knee.
Now started over fresh and new,
This time I know what I'm supposed to do,
Down on bended knee.
Something I said and worded wrong,
To go back and say it again I long,
Keeps me on bended knee.
Taking it slow,
Don't ya know?
I'm on bended knee.
And it's only you I love,
All others aside I shove,
I'm down on bended knee.
We have a love so so strong,
All those times I was wrong,
I'm on bended knee.
As beautiful as the morning sun,
To you I run,
I'm down on bended knee.
You're all I ever see,
All I could ever be,
Holds me down on bended knee.
It's outta my soul my heart,
I knew it from the very start,
And I'm down on bended knee.
Ever so beautiful are you,
Any and everything I will do,
I'm on bended knee.
How can I let you go?
Without you I dont know,
On bended knee.
You see how I love you dear?
I only wish right now you could hear my tear,
I'm down on bended knee....


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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-08-04 01:06 PM


Kyle aka Huck....

        This was a beautifully written
        poem and I'm glad I read it!!
        It has a plead for forgiveness
        in it that really got to me...
           If you were here, I'd help
        you up off your knees!!!
              (very Nice job!)


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~


Kyle aka Huck
Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA
2 posted 2000-08-04 11:48 PM


thanks i wrote it bout my g/f  she keeps me on bended knee or at least when we dont talk but when we do im flying high
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