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Somewhere On The Brink Of Time
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Somewhere On The Brink Of Time |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Somewhere On The Brink Of Time ~*Marge Tindal*~ Somewhere on the brink of time, I will awaken in the throes of your embrace. Held in the serenity of your smile, so sweetly graced. We'll hold eternity, as we hold our breaths. Making the most of the space we share, somewhere on the brink of time. A fraction of your attention seems an eternity. You capture me in your spirit, lilac-laced. Held in the serenity of your smile, so sweetly graced. Gone from my thoughts you will never be. Forever is just far enough to reach, somewhere on the brink of time. Phrases of rapture soothe the spirits crying. Sung of moments entwining, a melody returns the song. Held in the serenity of your smile, so sweetly graced. Strolling paths strewn with rose petals of unity, I will linger within your sacred glen. Somewhere on the brink of time, held in the serenity of your smile, so sweetly graced. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Hmmmmmmmm.... ...WOW... WOW...WOW ...WOW... Hmmmmmmmm.... Thats just the FOR and the NOT agreeing on one thing...  Marge, this is lovely... regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-04-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Love the title, and the repeating line, in fact, I love the whole thing! Liz |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
lovely imagery... well written, my friend!!  |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ohhhh, love this Marge, the lilac-laced spirit, the stroll down the path strewn with rose petals, that sacred glen. Oh, what beautiful images.....Bonnie |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wish I had just one ounce of your optimistic spirit, lady! Corinne |
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angelsamongus Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 70New York |
Hi Marge... Lovely poem, I really enjoyed it. I have missed you and everyone else this summer! Lori |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling serenely... |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Awesome Marge! A fraction of your attention seems an eternity Exactly what I'm looking for, someone who makes me feel this!  Right on lady! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Thank you FOR liking ... I'm glad that NOT is in agreement ! Elizabeth, my friend~ Glad you like it, hon. Some things just bear repeating, do they not? Doreen~ So very, very pleased that you enjoyed it. Bonnie~ Thank you, my friend. It was a delightful stroll. Corinne~ Oh ... I share ! You're welcome to all the optimism you can hold. Lori~ You have been missed by this lady. Glad you are back and enjoying. Serenity~ I kind of thought you might like it ! Makes me smile too ! Christopher~ And, my love ... she will find you and make you one happy man ! *promise* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I think this is one of my new favorites of yours, so many beautiful lines! Exceptional writing, dear poet sister! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is very lovely, Marge. Great work! Auguste |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge---Your optimism is so refreshing and I enjoy the daily sunshine you spread around the forum. Wonderful write for this cowboy to read.....bet you knew that huh gal? |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Love it, love it, love it!  Denise |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I love the title, I love your words and how you express yourself. I feel stronger inside just by reading it. Thank You. Jenn E |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ If you liked it well enough to make it a 'new favorite' ... I'm completely satisfied. Auguste~ Thank you so much. MarkB~ Hey there, cowboy ! Yeah, I kinda - sorta thought you might like ! I'm pretty basically a 'sunshine-spreading' kinda gal ! And you're my favorite shade of 'cowboy'! Denise~ Your reply pleases me soooooooo much. I thank you. JennE~ I am so filled with pleasure just knowing that I lent you some inner strength. Oh, the perks of being a poet ! Wonderful friends on every page. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, there is a delightfully ethereal quality to this treasure. Lovely, languid thoughts. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, I want to write like this! But I can only write like me, and it's NEVER like this! Wonderful! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ Not that it surprises me - but you picked up on the feeling that came over me as this one came to me. Thank you, my friend. MyPreciousSunshineFriend~ That is one heck of a compliment ! I thank you as sincerely as I can. You certainly aren't lacking anything in the poetry department, dear ! *Hugs* to you for being YOU ! Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, you, and others, hold the essence of my dreams... hugs, my friend... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My friend~ Your dreams are the essence of you ... which you lovingly put on display from the realm of your heart. *HUGS* for such a sweet, sweet lady ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"4ever is just far enough to reach" Oh Marge, I can't believe this one slipped thru my nightly read... Alas, I found this one you've penned and a delight it is for me... Coco |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge this is utterly divine, I love it, as I do all your work. But this is particually beautiful. It deserves armloads of bouquets, but since I can't send them to you, I'll give you an ovation instead. Bravo  |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
and to the before WOW's i shall add my own surealistic pleasure in reading excellant work... bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ You just happened to pick my favorite line - 'forever is just far enough to reach' It's true, isn't it ! Thank you. Marsha~ Your sweet reply is a bouquet in itself. I thank you. Daniel~ Thank you for your kind thoughts. You give me a smile. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Marge ~ I hope it is near for all those that seek it... beautiful poem... Steve B |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SteveB~ Oh, thank you for taking the time to enjoy this. I appreciate the kind words. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent Marge just excellent.....I have'nt been able to be around for a while and have missed your fine poetry...but this makes up for it all!!......take care ethome |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Yeah .... like you've been missed too, mister ! Glad you stopped by. I appreciate you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
ditto ethome, Marge ... when one comes across gems like these, the attraction is just too great ... a lovely piece My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Well you have given this soul some wondereful visions to dreams about, thanks friend. Love, cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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