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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-08-04 05:28 AM


Eyes unseen
haunting me,
a touch unfelt,
pain un-screamed,
wisp of kiss
touch not my lips,
words unheard,
love unredeemed.
Silent solace
silence weeps
arms of night
embracing me
tick of clock
for company
tauntings
of my undreamed dreams.

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-08-04 05:50 AM


WOW what an expression....

wonderfully written...


regards,
sudhir

Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2000-08-04 06:06 AM


Serenity~

Oh what pain
Insomnia
musings blame
Unslept
Unkept
Nighttime surrender
to the dreams
Words are herded
as sheep
Meant to be counted
by Little Bo Peep
Instead are eschewed
by Little Boy Blue
In search of the
haystack of sleep

*Why whatever am I going
to do with you ... ?
Now you've got me doing it !
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-08-04 07:48 AM


light a candle
cast a poetic spell
secrets to keep
demons to expell
dance in the darkness
greet the morns light
lullabyes foresaken
there is magic in the night
tho tired and weary
you will sleep in time
no rest for the gifted
till you've penned your rhyme
poems now written
thy wisdom of verse
sleep now sweet sen
rest free of this curse
******
me thinks its time to write me twin
a new lullaby  
i know baby...i know...
*kisskiss*
sleep me twin ...

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2000-08-04 01:58 PM


serenity....
            All I can say is how beautiful
            I thought this was...
               I so enjoy reading what you
                        write!!


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~


Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
5 posted 2000-08-04 03:58 PM


Serenity--embraced by the arms of the night...so much longing in your words...a lovely, sad poem. Hugs.
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2000-08-04 04:02 PM


Eyes unseen
haunting me,
a touch unfelt,
pain un-screamed,
wisp of kiss
touch not my lips,
words unheard,
love unredeemed.
Silent solace
silence weeps
arms of night
embracing me
tick of clock
for company
tauntings
of my undreamed dreams.


ahhhh the power of the night and what lies wihtin to consume our thoughts.  Great read here girl.....maybe you should get a dream catcher or two.lol  

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-04-2000).]

Jenn E
Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
7 posted 2000-08-04 09:29 PM


Yes, the night, how it can dominate the heart and mind. I loved this.

Jenn E

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

8 posted 2000-08-04 10:38 PM


Thanks to everyone, love ya much...and I'll sleep tonight, I think...smiles and hugs to you...zzzzzzzzzzzzz....
Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
9 posted 2001-08-04 08:41 PM



Oh my!  This is a raw purge of beauty~

Melissa~

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