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A Gown Of Invisible Colors
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A Gown Of Invisible Colors |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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A Gown Of Invisible Colors Your words are smooth as silken threads That weave for me a gown Invisible though it appears to all I feel colors of you all around. Passionate purple, rests close to my heart And the pinkness of lips that thought kiss The pale of the white that awaits your light touch And the gray of your eyes that I miss. Whenever you leave me I think of your gown And the comfort my heart feels within Knowing tomorrow, your eyes shall return And will be dancing upon my soft skin. Maureen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ Oh, I like ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Marge..some of these structured poems are some of my first and sometimes I think I like them best...this was when my emotions were extremely strong ~~soft thanks M |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
what a beautiful garment (and poem) indeed! this was very lovely and creative! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is a poem that seems to have all the right words ... what a gal you must be to pen such lovely thoughts ... and I see you were able to get your pic uploaded ... excuse me ... while I lift my jaw off the floor  You're going to have them lining up now Maureen! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Princess...sometimes I respond to others responses to my poems...and they inspire me to write another ... one day someone said to me he would dress me in a gown of invisible threads and from there a poem was born in me.. thank you for your comments, princess, I always look forward to them ~~soft smiles Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-04-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Rex...you are too cute... #1 I am over the half century mark..just am lucky to not look it....nor act it..(pic is my last one being happy...3 yrs ago) #2..you are making me blush... #3 ..thank you ((hugs)) Maureen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen, I don't know how I missed this one. Must be blinking again. Glad that I came by. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I've read this three times now but I'm no nearer a reply except to say, I love it.. HUGS "If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them." |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a beautifully done metaphor., it flows throughout the piece and leaves serenity at the ending. It is well crafted and tight. You should be very proud of this one Maureen. p.s. you cannot be 50!! I just turned 50 this year. Kathleen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I ditto Roses comments.. superb use of metaphor and sensual imagery and emotions... very lovely poem to read. take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well done, mmc, soft and romantic, as it should be...and flowed so nicely. jwesley |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill..then you must stop blinking dear..I don't want you to miss what you can't see ...anyway ..it was invisable you know.. ~~softly laffin' Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
RainbowGirl thank you ...and I love rainbows.... ~~smiling Maureen Disappearing Rainbows It rained today and all last night This morning tried to find The crescent shaped with colors bright That came with morning shine. I caught a small and quickened view Of stripes up in the sky But when I turned around, just once It left, before my eyes. The rainbow disappeared in fade And with it, so it seems Went many of my daily plans And many of my dreams. I'll try each time when sky tears fall And sun comes out once more To catch a glimpse of rainbow's hues As I have done before. And hope that I can capture them And store then in mind's eye Those elusive plans and dreams I make To become that butterfly. 6.16.99 |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kathleen, I just turned 51 at the end of June.. thank you and I guess we have a bit in common then ~~softly smiling other than beautiful Irish names Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Janet Marie ..thank you..now I just wish I could buy one that beautiful.. sighing Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
jwesley thank you for stopping to read my romantic flowing words ~~soft smiles M |
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