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Marina Light. . . --Challenge #8
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Marina Light. . . --Challenge #8 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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She shines Even though it's night She shines And the power of her light Shows like the sun Like her there is none She shines To all without hope She shines And throwing to them a rope She brings them in Giving peace within She shines To those gathered here She shines And she banishes their fear Giving them sleep Their dreams she will keep She shines Our Marina Light She shines And she guides our souls to flight Sharing her love Sent from up above ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Just beautiful, Sven... ~~softly sighing Maureen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent Sven-gator... you have done a fav poet of mine justice with your words of grace.. lovely sweet tribute well done, as always jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i will just echo Mmoonchild's **soft sighs**..your words are always touching and loving! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ This shines my friend well done Tracie~  Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well done Sven ..a beautiful piece.. love the format. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
AH Sven.....this is truly lovely!! Damn you made me look so good too!!! LOL You have put a smile on my face for this exceptional piece, my friend. Thank you..... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Sven quite a tribute!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Maureen, thank you. . . don't sigh too softly though. . . JM, thank you my friend. . . I did indeed try to do her justice. . . poutprincess, thank you. . . I do try. . . Tracie, thank you. . . as always. . . ethome, thanks, glad that you like the format, I like to play around with those from time to time Isis, thank you my friend. . . Marina, thank you. . . I am glad that you liked this. . . I hope that I surprised you just as you asked me to!! You are a good friend and I hope that I have been the same. . . thank you for your challenge. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Marina...what Sven has done for you makes us all happy... good job, Svengali  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ahh Sven, a beautiful poem for Marina. It has touched me very deeply, and it wasn't even written for me, so I can imagine how good it makes her feel. You are so talented and kind hearted, my friend Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sven,my friend,Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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