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another lonely night
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another lonely night |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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home alone again emptiness... cold bed hard to get used to remembering... how nice it was to have him near gently touching me he'd wrap me in his arms i'd let him for just a moment then i'd push him away is it him that i'm missing now? in this darkest hour? or am i just missing the idea of someone, anyone thinking the world of me? yet i said i didn't want that in my life didn't want to be his wife now lonliness waits up for me how i wish i'd known it would feel this way to be free he let me go never begged me to stay new at this night closes in it's a game no one wins no one knows if it's wrong or right and we all feel better in the morning light JULIE  Julie :) |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This struck a cord in me. You give so much emotion in your poems, I like that. Thank you for the read. Jenn E |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can imagine that nightime is the loneliest time of all. Sad poem, Julie. Denise |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Julie Ann, Very honest and well written. Auguste |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Julie Ann, Very honest and well written. Auguste |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Exactly why I try not to sleep.lol Wonderful verse from you once again. Try hugging two pillows instead of one. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I know this feeling very well JulieAnn....I hope this finds you well and on the road back to happiness..... if you ever need to talk I am only an icq ... email... yahoo instant message or msn message away  The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
doesn't it just suck how you can make it through the day alright, but then when you look at the empty bed feelings come crashing in? as Mark said...2 pillows is good...i personally tend to sleep on the couch alot. Tony |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes it can be such a lonely time...I think the two pillows might help....don't know. I do know that this is very well written and I could feel it inside. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you all for your kind replys...And I do sleep with two pillows,,,,,always have....Maybe I've just always been lonely.. who knows???....And the couch works well too Tony...saw enough THAT when I was married...too sad I know.... And Jeffery thank you I would love to meet you on ICQ....Someone to talk to would be nice....I usually just get lost in my CD collection...Lose myself to the music ya know??? Julie :) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice expression of loneliness...I know lonely too...sometimes not a nice place to be...sometimes its nice to be alone...like you said I also have lots of CD's...James |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
James~~~Thank you for taking the time to reply....I don't get that feeling very often but I guess it just hit me hard last night....I just had to keep remembering someone else out there is being lonely with me.... Julie :) |
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