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linda munday
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia

0 posted 2000-09-22 12:34 PM

Message In A Bottle
by Linda Munday

There were many times I wanted
For you to hold my hand
And so many times I needed
For you to understand

The message from my heart to yours
Bobbing on our stormy sea
You never really noticed
How I needed you to be

Someone who listened to my heart
When whispered through my tears
And maybe just a tissue passed
When I cried throughout the years

And though you called my your princess
Disappointment crowned my head
Your promises never broken
Because they were never said

So in my heart I kept the notes
Although they caused me pain
The message sealed inside blue glass
I’ll send the bottle out again.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

1 posted 2000-09-22 12:41 PM

hi LINDA,

I enjoyed this poem you have shared..

The flow of rhyme N heartfelt expression captivated this reader..

"your promises never broken because they were never said"...O my this one verse tugged the heart

Thanks for a great read

Coco

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 09-22-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2000-09-22 12:43 PM

Well that was one sweet read....and I must commend you on you vision of heart. Well penned my friend.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2000-09-22 01:20 AM

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It is that simple...good luck and enjoy them..they were given to me also. /pip/Forum33/HTML/003086.html

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

4 posted 2000-09-23 08:30 AM

And though you called my your princess
Disappointment crowned my head
Your promises never broken
Because they were never said

So in my heart I kept the notes
Although they caused me pain
The message sealed inside blue glass
I’ll send the bottle out again.

I hope the returning message this time is one of total love. beautiful poem.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

5 posted 2000-09-23 09:13 AM

This brought tears to my eyes and an ache to my heart...you held nothing back~ Exquisite~

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