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English Rose
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since 2000-08-20
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Berkshire, England

0 posted 2000-09-21 06:40 PM


He sat on the back porch, thinking
Of his bride-to-be wandering there,
How her hair it was silky and flaxen
And her gentle speech sang on the air.

As she softly came closer and touched him,
Gazing into his velvet brown eyes,
Her affection, respect and desire
She was foolish to try and disguise.

Athough their engagement was lengthy,
Some thirty five years in the make,
They decided they'd wait to be married
Before the last step they would take.

So for now, he just had to be patient
Until she would give him her love,
For she firmly believed that this marriage
Had been sent, as a gift, from above.

At last, all the waiting was over,
The ultimate day had arrived!
He nervously looked o'er his shoulder
To the welcoming eyes of his bride;

And as they walked proudly together,
The church choir began then to sing;
He turned to his bride, as his heart filled with  
                                            pride
For he knew he had done the right thing.

© Copyright 2000 Debbie Sanderson - All Rights Reserved
ddgoose
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since 2000-07-25
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Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-09-21 08:34 PM


English Rose

Bravo - beautiful story with a happy ending. He waited 35 years??  Now there is a man with patience!

                  didi

English Rose
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Berkshire, England
2 posted 2000-09-22 03:53 AM



I guess some things are worth waiting for!

American Princess
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3 posted 2000-09-22 06:51 AM


Oh Deb!

I love this!  I can see it in my head and hear the wedding march!
Thirty five years eh? Hope they were about 15 when they got engaged!

Really nice!

American Princess




It's only me, thinking out loud...

English Rose
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4 posted 2000-09-22 07:07 AM


Thanks AP....this is actually my interpretation of a very moving story I read once, written by a talented and insightful woman!!
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