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English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

0 posted 2000-09-21 05:46 PM

I loved a young boy once,
Handsome and strong;
We were happily married,
But not for too long!

He's started to wander,
Keeps comming home late;
The vows that he made me
He wants to delete!

He says he still cares,
But I know that's not true.
I wish I had someone
Who'd say what to do!

I think I still love him,
I'm not really sure;
But I know he's not worthy
Of me anymore!!

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2000-09-21 06:50 PM

Well, Rose, since you said you trust me, I guess I know what I look like!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2000-09-21 06:50 PM

Good evening English Rose,
I feel your distraugt, but happier times will prevail. Time passes, and with it, the heart mends. Been there English Rose, done that. Nice poem expressing your feelings.

English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

3 posted 2000-09-22 03:56 AM

I am at a loss over what you mean Balladeer..
unless you mean that you don't like this poem?? Still, you can't please all ovf the people all of the time I guess.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2000-09-22 06:45 AM

English Rose, wonderful work. You have put into words, so well, what many of us have been through. Remember, the only one who can say what you should do, is you.
Hold your head high and take care,
Dee

[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 09-22-2000).]

English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

5 posted 2000-09-22 07:05 AM

Duh!!!!....of course I get it really....I trust you so that means you must be ugly right?...WRONG! I bet you are extremely attractive!!

Thanks to everyone on this one...this poem does go some way into being a real experience
but I don't hurt as much as it may seem by these words!...honest!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2000-09-22 07:10 AM

One "UGLY" cowboy riding through.........gallop gallop...trot ...trot...trot....whoa !!!!! Now that was quite a piece of power venting in this one lil lady. Loved it and I would say you are right....he doens't deserve you anymore. Great read....slowly trotting outta here.

English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

7 posted 2000-09-22 07:13 AM

ROFL Mark!!.....geeze I never realised there were so many ugly guys in here!!!! LOL

linda munday
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia

8 posted 2000-09-22 07:25 AM

Seeing as I'm female, I guess I'm safe lol
I saw you explain the situation to the others and although you expressed yourself superbly in the poem, I know that sometimes you can draw from distant experience.
A quietly powerful poem.
Thanks for letting us see it,
Linda Munday

English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

9 posted 2000-09-22 08:48 AM

Thanks Linda!!

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