Open Poetry #9 |
Duet In Time |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
When you came to me It seemed like a dream You made things real Much more than they would have ever seemed One day, our songs came into harmony Music straight from the heart It had been so long since I sung that way I wasn't sure how to start Like songs about love And poems that rhyme Together we'll always be Playing our duet in time. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven... You touched my musician's soul with this one, my friend.......just beautiful, as you always write!! Thank you for sharing your song!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
applause, this deserves a standing ovation!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Enjoyed this very much. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This is such a lovely poem, you write with your heart and soul and it shows. I really like this well done. As Sunny says a beautiful song. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and there, in your dreams held together by moon's own beams reality lingered in your heart and things were as they seemed and your song is heard... |
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