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Sven
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0 posted 2000-09-21 12:30 PM


When you came to me
It seemed like a dream
You made things real
Much more than they
               would have ever seemed

One day, our songs came into harmony
Music straight from the heart
It had been so long since I sung that way
I wasn't sure how to start

Like songs about love
And poems that rhyme
Together we'll always be
Playing our duet in time. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2000-09-21 12:57 PM



Sven...
       You touched my musician's soul with this one, my friend.......just beautiful, as you always write!!
       Thank you for sharing your song!!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2000-09-21 12:59 PM


applause, this deserves a standing ovation!!
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2000-09-21 01:04 PM


Sven,
Enjoyed this very much.

Marsha
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4 posted 2000-09-21 01:44 PM


This is such a lovely poem, you write with your heart and soul and it shows. I really like this well done. As Sunny says a beautiful song.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2000-09-21 01:51 PM


and there, in your dreams
held together by moon's own beams
reality lingered in your heart
and things were as they seemed

and your song is heard...

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